Some 3d Art

[m.c.bell]

Ive got some 3d abstract art going on and i just want some suggestions and criticsisments and preferences to make it better here they are,

It will be in two pieces

a)
http://mike.zaaz.co.uk/box.jpg

b)
http://mike.zaaz.co.uk/circle.jpg

Thanks ,

M

[pissant]

The lack of shadows unnerves me a bit. It also makes the grey tube things look like they're floating, especially on the bottom picture. Then again, maybe they are floating. Now I've confused myself...

[mdipi]

kinda cool, like something you would see in an art musame. i cant see the abstract of it, i lke it. what proggi?

[eyeinfinitude]

It's a good start, but I agree with pissant, the lack of shadow play makes it too generic. Try throwing in an enviroment and a floor plane to make it more interesting.

[thoriphes]

a nice metallic texture would also look nice. :)

[m.c.bell]

new effect with shadow and then with plastic effect

a)
http://mike.zaaz.co.uk/circleshadowthin.jpg

b)
http://mike.zaaz.co.uk/circleshadowplasticthin.jpg

What do u think?

[eyeinfinitude]

The first one with the shadow applied to it is an improvement. I'm not too sure about the second one though, the plastic texture is a bit of an overkill.

[mdipi]

yeah i like the first one a whole lot more. but the second one looks kind acool....

[kei]

i think its a nice start

u should add heaps more of those tube things around the sphere :) that would look awsome! :)

[iLikePie]

the first one with the shadows added looks really good, but i agree with the others that the plastic wrap doesn't help much... and it looks very obvious as a filter