Thanks to you guys, I finished this, Critique Please

[JBN]

Seriously, this site has been invaluable. I would have given up Flash long ago, but all the help I've gotten here has made it so that I can actually write my own AS sometimes and find creative solutions to all kinds of problems. So without further ado: http://www.jasonbow.com

I won't preamble about intentions, just tell me your thoughts, I'd love to hear. BTW, all of the photography on there is mine, except the actual CD label in the discography section. I used a lot of help building this from tutorials and all of you in the forums, I'll never be able to thank you guys enough. Hopefully one day I'll be so good at AS that I can actually chime in and help people!

[Lounge]

Think its really nice, like its mostly b&w

Not to crazy about the menu font, not so easy to read, and the font on the contact page is very different from the style of the rest of the site.

Nice job

[Cello]

Good job JBN - nice minimal and restrained concept. I agree about making type design consistent across the site.

one question though. There are a couple of his tracks I really like but can't find where to buy the album... where can i buy?!

[phorte]

very nice. the only major thing i would say is the rollover and selected effect for the menu has a hard edge along the top. I would say either get rid of the margin sits against the browser toolbar, or get rid of the hard edge all together.

It just looks a bit off with full spotlight circles everywhere else, but the ones up the top are cut off.

Nice work on the rest though.

-Phorte

[project107]

It's ok.

Hard to read the font, especially on the links page.

I don't like people resize my browser window, and you did it just to show me more empty black space.

Also, I was looking for something a little more with the discog. like a track list at least. < without it, there's nothing that differentiates that with the photo section.

[thesparky007]

I have to say, nothing but the functionality is good
the text is hard to read, rollovers are weird and everything else just gives me an icky feeling

[nobody]

Browser resizing = instantly closed your site.