new R. Design

[roberto]

hey!
i gave a wrong link, sry. Here it is:
Click here to enter R. Design (http://robert.kappa.ro)

Tell me what you think about it, good, bad, it doesn't matter.
Concentrate more at the flash version, but also tell me what you think about the html version.

Thanks!

:beam:

[pete]

wrong link!!!

[fluid_0ne]

1. link http://robert.kappa.ro/
2. your site suxx
3. you know why

[pete]

is this suxx to be taken positiv or negativ ???
and why ??

[fluid_0ne]

fluid_0ne: negative

kirupa - understood but this guy pissed me off!!!

KIRUPA: gotcha :) Still, you should have PM'ed the mods or I, and we would have corrected Roberto in the other thread.

[pete]

what i really don't like is your comic sans font !!

change it and your side becomes much better
take a font like verdana or so

[asphaltcowboy]

fluid_0ne - for goodness sake, grow up.

two wrongs do not make a right.

[kirupa]

Hey Robert,
The site is pretty good, but there are areas where you can improve. For an informational site such as yours, I think the content is readable and well-laid out. The font for Time, Today, and Date should be changed to something less blurry. You may also want to add something to the first "home" scene on your animation - it is simply too empty. Some text there wouldn't hurt ;)

Your HTML version is quite good. Nice, clean, and simple. I find that you have numerous sections with only one or two lines of centered text. Having few lines of text randomly strewn about looks incomplete to me. If you want to, you could expand some of our one or two line sentences into a paragraph form. If you do decide to expand your texts, remove the Centering on the text.

Cheers!
Kirupa :ub:

[fluid_0ne]

asphalt - read http://www.kirupaforum.com/forums/showthread.php?s=&threadid=28059

[asphaltcowboy]

stop being an idiot. (I cant believe you edited the post that kirupa edited..)

I know. I read it. That's why I said "two wrongs don't make a right" :sigh:

[pete]

he guys calm down !!

and wath means kewl i didnt find this word in my english dictionary

[asphaltcowboy]

just a (silly :P) way of saying 'cool' :)

[pete]

ok i will not use it
although cool has the same length as kewl (makes no sense i think)

[Alucard_X]

roberto,
you should expect criticisms as harsh as you give out. That is only fair.

In that respect, "no offence, but your site sucks".

It is very difficult to hear someone so easily belittle something you have worked hard on and created.
I know my flash skills are pitiful in comparison to most of the people here, but i do not feel ashamed to post my work, because i know those who are flash experts will offer my constructive advice and words of encouragement.

In that respect you should try to be nicer towards those who are flash-newbies. It helps build a nice community.

Anyway, with regards to your site i would suggest the following:

1. try using better fonts, try http://www.fontsforflash.com

2. Your interface is nicely animated, but change your logo to maybe an image which people can associate with your site.

3. Try using a picture benaeth your banner to spruce the page up a bit.

4. with all due respect, it is better to develop your skills at deisgn before offering to create web sites for clients. You homepage is the image the clients have of your skills.


If you need some ideas i am sure everyone will be more than willing to help if you learn to be like that with others too.