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valvika
November 5th, 2007, 03:44 AM
hi,
I’d like to know your opinion and remarks under developed 1st version of the project http://esigns.com (http://esigns.com/)
Project aim: to enable the user to create a design of a sign on the advertising carrier online by himself, to look at variant he gets and to buy it.

Technologies: The project is realized on Flash8+FlashRemoting +amfphp +xml +php +mysql, i.e. works under Unix (now on MediaTemple). As a result of work user gets a sign in SVG-format and its further modifications in ÀI are naturally possible. I.e. somewhat it is the simple SVG-editor on flash
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Thanks for any of your comments.

Timmytots
November 5th, 2007, 10:57 AM
spam off!

Gundark
November 5th, 2007, 11:01 AM
I'd not jump to the spam conclusion, but this does seem like it should be in the critiques section. I was under the impression that it was "un-kool" to post your own site in the Kool Sites section.

Perhaps a friendly/helpful mod will move it.

Templarian
November 5th, 2007, 11:03 AM
Timmy Its not spam hes just new... and be nice. A mod will move this to showcase and crit.

I would make the application fullscreen as in the 100% width height for the swf.

Good luck

RabBell
November 6th, 2007, 04:48 AM
I agree with making it 100% of the browser and I would remove some of the text. There is a lot of text on the page. I would also make it a little more obvious as to which part of text on the page tells me what the site does.

You need to have a bit of text nearer the top of the page basically saying "Welcome to the site, here is it's purpose". Then the rest of the text needs to be seperated from this. To be honest I didn't even read the text. It was just a little too much, but I would defintely remove the majority of it, add some imagery (more examples of the produced banner perhaps) and increase to 100% browser size.

I'd maybe review the colours you've used as well but that is just my personal preference.