Happyness!!

[Qued]

http://www.notintheface.biz/2/
Its okayish a bit too neon I'm thinking though. Need some crits on it before I continue working on it.

[haven]

a bit neon. the colors are ok. the font is.. ok-ish. just work on it more. add some form of navigation.

[x3brand]

http://www.notintheface.biz/2/
Its okayish a bit too neon I'm thinking though. Need some crits on it before I continue working on it.

I'm not a fan of how similar the background color and the text box are. Granted, it is green and it might be impossible to find a matching color. I would change the way your "n" looks at the top. The font is a bit silly as well as the stroke and inner shadow. You're doing so much flat vector art that that really conflicts.

Are there going to be more pages? If so, where is the navigation going?

[Pasquale]

Yick. Don't make big design loving statements when you don't have something super enough to present.

It looks dated, and the type is weak.

Did you create a wireframe first?

[Phenex]

The 404 looks cool! :thumb:

[haven]

mmhm. ^looks like improvement. jkjk.