need opinion

[fred]

ermm i created a poster with photoshop for my college assignment. i submitted it already and why don't you guys give me some opinion on it?

http://www.geocities.com/coolrocko/Uploads/MatrixEvolution.jpg

ermm i did all the effect except Neo. i actually took it from the original Reloaded poster. ermm there is 6 layer in it and umm i guess thats all. tell me what you think about it ;)

[eilsoe]

link's dead. and yes, I tried copy'n paste it...

[replode]

it worked for me. its pretty good, although the matrix effect is not that hard to recreate. and why is it evolution instead of revolution?

[fluid_0ne]

:thumb:

[eyeinfinitude]

Good start, but if you look closely, you can still see that it's a bit rough around the edges of Neo.

You can clean that up, by feathering the edges a bit like by 2-3 pixels.

[Voetsjoeba]

Can't enter either. Can you post the image here ?

[fred]

ermm the image size is too big. 546 kb. heh i purposely rename it to matrix evolution and guess what it will be release earlier than matrix revolution lol!

[peewy]

I think matrixing the cinema ... <<< can use some typography.
Try to use bigger fontsizes, line them, ... do something with it.
You have lot's of possibilities to play with.
Make it impressive and let shine out this 13 th septhember, now it's little and allmost unreadable, but in fact it's one of the most important things, the date.
It's not all that bad, but i'm justing saying things you maybe can think over.
But your ideas are very good :) the matrix is very good too :)

[Eberth]

Originally posted by eilsoe
link's dead. and yes, I tried copy'n paste it...

right click on the link, and copy shortcut, then paste on browser...

[asphaltcowboy]

that's what he said he did... :-\

[fluid_0ne]

worksd 4 me...

[Voetsjoeba]

Works now :) Very good, although it is indeed a bit rough around the edges, as EG said before. But in general, it's very good :thumb:

[fred]

thanks guys!! appreciate it! :tb: