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Sauce2k
June 30th, 2003, 05:52 PM
Hey, a friend asked me to design a site for him on geocities, its kinda in a "beta stage" but is getting better everyday. Please give me some critique (good or bad).

Link (http://www.geocities.com/daniel_h23_2000)

eyeinfinitude
June 30th, 2003, 05:59 PM
There's a lot of problems with it, I'll list the ones I noticed.

1) The layout is really pixelated.

2) Text are really blurry.

3) Transitions are a bit buggy, the doors don't work right, they sort of jump.

Sauce2k
June 30th, 2003, 06:03 PM
:-\ gotta get back to work then

turkey
June 30th, 2003, 09:51 PM
text is cramped also.. It hurts my eyes.

Osman
July 1st, 2003, 03:21 AM
FFF Atlantis would be a fine font selection for layout

Voetsjoeba
July 1st, 2003, 04:30 AM
Just to help you :)

1) You gotta use another font for the news, you broke it apart and it fills itself automatically. That means that it ain't no good Flash font ( I thought those were for PhotoShop but I'm not sure )

2) The interface graphic is totally blurred.

3) The content font is blurred and is totally illegible too. Even if it wasn't blurred, it would still be illegible. Use another font.

4) The user must have choice between different songs. The song you have now is cool for the first two-three times, bu after a while it starts getting annoying. The time from my Reply button hit to this sentence that is. *switches off music*.

5) Work on the transitions. The screens just spawn in the middle of the movie sometimes. I wrote a tutorial on how to make transitions between external loaded movies. Find it here (http://users.pandora.be/voetsjoeba/kirupa/trans.htm)

Sauce2k
July 1st, 2003, 09:29 AM
thx a lot for everything :) i'll be sure to check out that tutorial Voetsjoeba :thumb: