My first pixel art building

[notsocoolxp]

This is my first pixel art building. Comments would be great :D

[travis]

Hey it's a great start, however there are some things that are fundamentally wrong; the windows do not line up with the roof or walls and the there is very little texture.

Work on those windows and add some texture to the building it will be look'en great.

[michaelR]

:h:

the windows are horrible, the doors are way to big and the people also ... a lot work to do

... but the building itself is nice and rectangular (-:

[BradLee]

I like the way your people look, but when compared to the your building they are like two stories tall!

Make the windows line up, shrink your people, and add some texture and it'll look real good!

[Christian525]

The people,the building and the dorr is ok but the windows are not ok.

This is my first pixel art.
http://www.mmoccforum.com/imagehosting/191646b9be257eb92.bmp

I went on pixel art websites and looked at the tutorials. I go on this other forum and they liked it. I just need to fix that bright green and the shadows.

[eleven2]

not a bad start at all!

[Gx3 Grafix]

it's not bad for a first shot. Like previously said you already know about the windows. Others may say that the people are fine but I disagree. Aside from the size the person in the back seems to be either levitating or able to walk through walls.

Nice work though.