View Full Version : First Flash/Redesign
pokefan
July 26th, 2007, 08:44 PM
With all the help of these wonderful forums I've started putting together my first flash site. This is a complete redesign of the studio I work for. I opened my mouth about how lame the original was and got the job.:ko: I actually really enjoy working in flash but it's been about 5 years since I've done anything. So it's slow going right now.
It's just the structure so far not all filled in.
LINKY (http://www.geneseephoto.com/static/test/test.html)
On the app page I want to do an auto form that will fill an array and send a txt document to an email anyone can point me in that direction that would be cool.
Critique Away!
be nice!!!
EDIT: Just noticed one of the songs (better) is a dead link. I'll have to fix that tomorrow.
mr.skribbs
July 27th, 2007, 09:26 AM
Hey man, Its a pretty sick logo, Give the page a title cause Untitled doesnt look pro., needs a preloader(s). Nice song. Embed the font
Also try to make a default image appear in the portfolio, so its not one giant blank screen
Nice job though
pokefan
July 27th, 2007, 11:21 AM
It will have a title and more html info when it's done. I just didn't feel like messing with it right now. This is just tester for now.
I wasn't sure about a preloader cause the whole movie's only 60k I kinda figured it would load to fast to even see it. I'll work something up maybe in intro screen as well so it doesn't just jump over.
Esoltas
July 27th, 2007, 01:37 PM
i'm going to be honest.
The nav is hideous. I'd rethink the rollovers is what I mean.
Smooth out the scrolling on the slideshow thing on the right.
Oh, and never, ever autoplay music on a sight unless you're a musician. Get rid of it.
Other than that, it's just okay. Nothing too special.
pokefan
July 27th, 2007, 02:59 PM
I honestly don't like autoplay music either but that's what they want. The recording studio is the owners brother so he wants it there I can't get rid of it. So it's just the rollover's not the layout that you dislike?
Esoltas
July 27th, 2007, 04:26 PM
no. reread my first post and you'll see that I also complained about the scrolling slideshow. If you need to have the mp3 player you could make it look nice.
pokefan
July 27th, 2007, 05:35 PM
no. reread my first post and you'll see that I also complained about the scrolling slideshow. If you need to have the mp3 player you could make it look nice.
:huh:
Complain all you want your not the customer. You want to help that's awesome and I appreciate it but no need to be snide. But thanks for the pointers anyway. I'll find something to work with the player.
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