How can i make this better??? (flash game)

[The_Doctor]

So this is my first game ever and well as you can tell it works fine... and everthing is good except for the graphics.... so if ne 1 would like to help or has ne suggestion reply, pm me, email me at bubba.ek.91@gmail.com... here's the link

http://theorangeday.com/erikkol/white/cs/preska.html


thanks 4 the help

[Sirisian]

Yeah graphics definitely need some work. You need to make the button to skip the front movie more evident and move it to the bottom right. Also you need to allow a player to restart on the level they were on. Don't force them to go back to the beginning. The replayability for the game is very low, which I think you already know. You might want to slow down the gameplay and if the fps isn't already at 30 raise it to that. Another thing I found odd was that I couldn't tell where the hit-detection boundaries are. Is it at his feet or is it the whole character? With the perspective you are using make the player top down since everything else in the game is.

If you aren't good with graphics, I recommend taking out the whole front credits. Either make a button on the main menu or put the info on the main menu. For instance, if you have a story mode you might make a little cinematic between each level.

Another thing about restarting. When the player clicks restarts just restart the level don't take them back to the main menu. Making a button to go to the main menu would be fine also.

Just work on it some more. I do not recommend submitting this anywhere (like newgrounds or anything) just yet. (I am tired of helping to blam things as it is).

[hybrid101]

the menus, quite frankly, need loads of work.
graphics could use a bit of touching up, that restart button is way annoying
and don't use iron man-black sabbath if you don't wanna get sued:P