Sister Mary Dracula beta

[Skarab]

This is a web page that I've been building to promote chapter 1 of my graphic
novel, "Sister Mary Dracula". Not all links are live yet but I'd be happy to have any comments or critiques on the animations, sounds, design, etc.

The site will be going live later in the summer and I'll let you know when it's complete and ready to go.

http://www.mooneyart.com/SMDindex.html

[-=IchWill=-]

Quite funny but there is only one thing I dislike: that blood animation on one of the grave stones... All the animations look ok except for that blood animation ( and maybe the flying bats ).

[mook]

ichWill is right, the blood looks weird. overall, though, I like it.

[DanontheMoon]

Oooooo, Dracula. My Mac doesn't like your page I'll check it out later.

[Skarab]

Good point, I'll work on fine-tuning that. Ironically, I got a call from the blood bank just this morning to come in and donate! Coincidence? I don't think so!

[hybrid101]

just. too.many.fonts.
haha, keep it simple, the animations are quite good:D

[Pasquale]

That navigation would be a lot nicer if it has some animated rollover states on them.

The two coffins on either side of the header make the whole thing feel a little less "whole" because it breaks up the top too much.


Try to increase the height of the design as well. Right now all the text is bunched up at the bottom, and would be a lot nicer to read if it was spaced out nicely.


Also, pick 2 fonts - 3 MAX, use them consistently and stick with them.

:2c:

[Skarab]

thanks guys, that's some good input.

[Skarab]

I've done some tweaks and posted a new version. Still working on a few things but all your crits helped.

[Pasquale]

The background needs to pop more. Try adding something like bats, or clouds to it :)