Hey, something i am working on, Very Rough

[mikedarling905]

Opinions and thoughts (new to AS3) and well I like to continually learn when I do something. So this new adventure is my attempt to finally move away from that behaviors thing i always used for flash :) and perhaps make a cool site too. just on the beginning parts of it, I am aiming for a contemporary/simple feel.

http://unlockyourself.net/mike/

opinions or whatever, i enjoy criticism and accept it.

Mike.

[Anogar]

It's way too rough to comment on.

[kdd]

Fonts, font colors, text-alignment, black bg, white bg, animation are not good. :(

I think you should look at some flash sites in Kool Sites category on kirupaForum, and then totally redo your site...

[thatguythatsme]

Seeing 5 different font on one screen screamed out to me immediately. You should pick one, maybe two fonts at most. Perhaps look at some sites you like and break them down as to what it is you like about them, then develop your own style over that.

Perhaps look at http://www.thefwa.com, or http://www.designcharts.com/ or even http://www.refreshlinks.org.uk/ and even http://www.cssremix.com, there are plenty more. Also http://www.smashingmagazine.com has some awsome galleries of sites...

David

[joran420]

make a mute sound button...

[o12ib.06]

Way too basic and rough. To be honest, the first thing that hit me when it loaded was: "WTF ??!!"... Can't comment upon it, there's nothing to comment upon actually.

[pokefan]

I personally don't like sites to start blaring at me when I open them that usually turns me off pretty quick. That being said, at LEAST put a mute button somewhere to turn it off. But yeah, what they said pretty basic right now