Check it out...

[streetplayer]

Yo all,
Check out my site,

www.sp-vision.com (http://www.sp-vision.com)

The business section is still under development and is one of my first attempts at using flash(web site wise). :)

The pleasure part instead is up and running and is more html based.

Please post any comments or suggestions, everything will be usefull for me.

Peace out,

-SP-

P.S. Both sections where designed slightly more towards broadband connection users. (sorry modem users)

[Daveman]

Not bad, fonts are kind of blurry, loaded ok on my 56k, still get scroll bars at the bottom at 800x600...

Dave

[asphaltcowboy]

any reason for the half naked women that adorn the splash page and BUSINESS section? rather unprofessional imo. in fact, i'd probably argue that the pleasure section is more professional than the business section. which is bad.

didnt anyone ever tell you not to mix business with pleasure? :P

[streetplayer]

Thx for your replies... Im probably gonna redesign the business section n make it more "professional", I just need to get better at flash. :)

The pleasure section though ill keep it how it is. And as for the half naked woman, well she works for me ;)... j/k... dunno i think i might change it.

Any more comments and suggestions are more than welcome...

[asphaltcowboy]

Originally posted by streetplayer
as for the half naked woman, well she works for me ;)... j/k... dunno i think i might change it.doesnt really scream 'professionalism' tbh :)

[streetplayer]

Originally posted by asphaltcowboy
doesnt really scream 'professionalism' tbh :)

Im allready workin' on a new splash screen.
Ill keep you up to date bout it. :)

Newayz any coments or suggestions bout the actual site?

[asphaltcowboy]

it's ok. in the business section, the slidey-doors should open automatically once the page is loaded. I was sat there for ages thinking it was preloading ;)

You also need to put hit areas behind your buttons. At the moment you have to actually get it on the letter. the font: it's ok for the titles/navbar, but it's not very nice to read as body text. I'd suggest choosing something more simple.

do the portfolio and services sections exist yet? atm, if I click on one of those and then go back to click on one of the other links (e.g. home) I start getting debug errors.

the logo bar at the very top feels somewhat random. the fact that you've got a two big boxes for the title and then the tagline makes it look like the second box down is an advert (this is reinforced by the fact there is a half-naked chest in it).

the Pleasure section is good on the whole