Logo/Busniess card Wip watcha think?

[koolkrasher]

Working on a new card for my self as well as a logo this is what i have so far.Leme know what you guys think of it.Rip it apart i want it to be perfect lol^^

ps the image is within the boundries of the card its self so it gives it a border of sorts.

[will roberts]

i like it, nice and simple and does what it says on the tin.
I prefer the first though

[Esoltas]

just make sure its an svg.

[Fl4SH'ER]

If the text on it would be WHITE and not messed up with those crap colors then it would just work... but i'm not liking the cards in the shape they are now ( still if i have to chose one, then i'd say NR 1 ).

[hybrid101]

first one, love the type btw;)

[Pasquale]

first one, love the type btw;):lol: no offense but your taste in type is shocking hahahahaah.

I can see the effect you are going for, but a more readable type would be better. Since it is the only thing on the card it needs to be visually strong and clear. It looks really smeared and hard to register until you look over the form a few times.

Keep with the effect on number one, but pick a more well defined font (well hand writing if it is that)

[koolkrasher]

Thanks for the feed back. The font for Anthony is my hand writing i couldnt find a font that i liked so i just did my name up in illustrator hahahahaah. the graphic artist part is a font called steves handwriting, and that is just the front of the card forgot to mention that earlier. still thiing of what to put on the back

[Phenex]

And where the black-bats is your contact info on it?

[Fl4SH'ER]

^ on the back :lol: Can't you see it ? :lol:

[koolkrasher]

didnt get to the back yet still workin on the front >< but all my contact stuff will be on the back.

[Phenex]

^ on the back :lol: Can't you see it ? :lol:

Oh crap! I forgot to wear my X-Ray glasses again! :P

[Fl4SH'ER]

^ heh, i have an X-Ray implant ! You should try it too, it has 2 different functions: 1) i can do the back reading trick 2) just imagine what i see when taking a walk on the beach on a hot summer day ( still... it has one tiny thing that might get disturbing... i can't filter the females from the males... :wasted: ) !

[hybrid101]

lol darkmotion:P
i want design fonts and ones with effects, not helvetica and crap:P