A presentation cartoon thingy

[foodpk]

Hi!
The company I work with is making a card system where you can shop at various retailers and collect discounts with them and stuff. I made a presentation cartoon for it. I was on a pretty tight schedule so if I had more time I'd add a bit more (subtle) animation and make better use of anticipation, but overall I'm pretty pleased with the result. It's amazing what sound effects and fitting music can do for such things.
http://blippo.addr.com/mojakartica5.html

[glosrfc]

It looks good even if I didn't understand a word of it. You're right though - the music is appropriate and the minimalist style also reminds me of those crazy East European cartoons they used to bamboozle kids with (and probably still do) on Saturday morning TV.

Might be better to fade the music out towards the end rather than it coming to a sudden stop but otherwise....Nice Job!

[Flamingtoaster]

I have to agree, looks very nice and though I didn't understand the writing....and didn't hear audio if it had it, it looked great and I still understood what was happening just by what I saw. Well done :D

[Pasquale]

The start menu is gold :lol:

[hybrid101]

animation is cool, but a bit slow for me. AND LOL @ the computer. i see the windows start button:lol:

[haam]

animation is cool, but a bit slow for me. AND LOL @ the computer. i see the windows start button:lol:

i agree, but only a few scenes are a little to slow, like the first scene with the clouds goes a little to long. see if you can streamline the the scenes that done take part in telling the story.

[CreationsCentre]

Lol, love the animation! :P