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haven
March 18th, 2007, 04:04 AM
http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/9525/sclweb2nddraftscreenshobg9.png

This is a rough for a webbie im workin on. its for free, and it is supposed to be simple. Any critique is appreciated, just not evil kind:ogre:

EDIT: The client hasnt told me what to pop in for the text. also check out my question as well...http://www.kirupa.com/forum/showthread.php?t=254112

Pasquale
March 18th, 2007, 07:29 AM
ROFL

(jks)

- Drop the bevels and harsh shadows
- Pick some cleaner typo
- Do something about the huge space that the header creates
- Add more tone

hybrid101
March 18th, 2007, 11:15 AM
bit blurry, lose the bevels.
make the general contractor text all white:)

haven
March 18th, 2007, 03:31 PM
it looks too plain with out the bevels and shadow, especially by the black panel and header. The client was looking for something like howlandhomes.com, but in black. And as you can see, the header on that site is outrageously huge>.<