Analyse this site

[manikk]

Please do analyse the site - www.4theworld2c.com (http://www.4theworld2c.com) - and post what you think...

[RabBell]

thanks for that....I'm in an office where my boss can see my screen and he's now wondering why my screen was filled with flying love hearts and valentine messages....

thanks a ****ing bunch :look:

[Phenex]

That is something I really didn't need to see. Thanks anyways.

[Cello]

Looks like you're spamming up your site with multiple posts on this forum.

Please stop, there's a good chap.

[manikk]

Thanks for your reply guys... We are still working on it to improve it...

By the way..for registering you have to click the "Capture a heart" link on the top right corner or click the empty little hearts... a big heart will open..on that click "Buy Now"...You will be redirected to the registration page...After the registration...you will be sent a confirmation email . After confirming from the email...your registration have to be approved by the administrator..The approval/rejection status will be sent to your email. After these your photo will be displayed in the 3d heart.On clicking the heart with image,you will be taken to a display page ...where you can view your given message and etc.,

[Fl4SH'ER]

that's just horrible... sorry, but it's horrible... bleh

[RabBell]

Thanks for your reply guys... We are still working on it to improve it...

By the way..for registering you have to click the "Capture a heart" link on the top right corner or click the empty little hearts... a big heart will open..on that click "Buy Now"...You will be redirected to the registration page...After the registration...you will be sent a confirmation email . After confirming from the email...your registration have to be approved by the administrator..The approval/rejection status will be sent to your email. After these your photo will be displayed in the 3d heart.On clicking the heart with image,you will be taken to a display page ...where you can view your given message and etc.,

this is spam....you're advertising your site, you've not even read our comments about how ugly your site is, you're looking for people to sign up

You say 'By the way' as if oh I just had a thought but you're not looking for feedback from us you're only looking for members.

The most blatant piece of spam I ever did see.

[manikk]

this is spam....you're advertising your site, you've not even read our comments about how ugly your site is, you're looking for people to sign up

You say 'By the way' as if oh I just had a thought but you're not looking for feedback from us you're only looking for members.

The most blatant piece of spam I ever did see.


Ok..Thank you ..you Kirupa.com people ... I came to know well about you people in this place... No decent or in depth critiques... Is this the way you taught in your schools and workplace to behave ? See ...what's your feed backs/critiques are...Just in a single line... Any developer or designer wont need this... Why we people come to this place and post for critiques ? Just think --

[rhamej]

Ok..Thank you ..you Kirupa.com people ... I came to know well about you people in this place... No decent or in depth critiques... Is this the way you taught in your schools and workplace to behave ? See ...what's your feed backs/critiques are...Just in a single line... Any developer or designer wont need this... Why we people come to this place and post for critiques ? Just think --
:huh:

I looked at your other posts, I don't see any spam as mentioned.
Weird site is all I have to say for my critique though. =)

[thats all folks]

The idea behind the site seems cool, but the design lacks, it looks unorganized. I know the hearts are the main point but there’s just so many of them that they become distracting for me. Your fonts at the bottom are blurry on my screen. I would like to see a different color background and better font choice for most of the text. Your "view heart" should be placed up top kind of like most “search boxes” are. I think you could layout all info up top making it easier for the user to navigate instead of jumping around to click here then click over there.

Cheers

[RabBell]

Ok..Thank you ..you Kirupa.com people ... I came to know well about you people in this place... No decent or in depth critiques... Is this the way you taught in your schools and workplace to behave ? See ...what's your feed backs/critiques are...Just in a single line... Any developer or designer wont need this... Why we people come to this place and post for critiques ? Just think --

You have been given critique above and you ignored it. Instead you started to tell us how to sign up for your site. To me your a spammer and a drain on this forums resources. If you're genuine about getting feedback why haven't you shown one bit of interest in what people have to say about your site? Why are you telling us how to sign up?

I'll repeat, you seem more interested in attracting people to sign up to your site than to get feedback for your site. If this is the case, then why should I waste my time looking at your site when you're not even going to read peoples feedback.

[JoshuaJonah]

My in-depth critique: I just threw up in my mouth a little, but it's ok, i swallowed it again.

[RabBell]

My in-depth critique: I just threw up in my mouth a little, but it's ok, i swallowed it again.

:lol:, thanks....thats made my day :D

[BoonDock]

thanks for that....I'm in an office where my boss can see my screen and he's now wondering why my screen was filled with flying love hearts and valentine messages....

thanks a ****ing bunch :look:


:lol::lol::lol::lol::lol::lol::lol::lol::lol::lol: :lol::lol::lol::lol::lol:

[manikk]

The point is ... I had a feed back from a user of another forum that ..he was little confused...about how it was working...I have had to explain him...I just thought that the users here also get confused of " what this is all about? ".. So..I post the same thing here... There is no other intention in that...I post it as an explanation...but it is conveyed as ..something else..I think I need to improve my english language skills...

Thanks Guys
-Manikk

[balu_80]

thanks for that....I'm in an office where my boss can see my screen and he's now wondering why my screen was filled with flying love hearts and valentine messages....

thanks a ****ing bunch :look:

Do u think ****ing bunch is what people will want as critique, dont u feel ashamed of it, and in ur other posts, I saw similar words and u feel great of other person's critique as well as urs and u r commenting it with Icons. Think in a pig well, even a lion turns pig becos it eats only what we call human dungs, Ok, please dont put your dung in the forum posts and make other people to put the same. Ok.

[fabiopb]

manikk, i am guessing the site is for a partner or family member, right? i like the intention, especially if you are trying to improve it for them.

i think the little hearts are a nice idea, but there are too many of them. the navigation of the site is not as simple as one would like (or at least myself), in regards to the little hearts, and the 'love', 'broken heart' and 'my valentine' floating little hearts.

also one last question: where does the money go to - you, like a donation; an organization; a charity; etc?

so to summarize, perhaps it needs to be simplified a little, and be less crowded with content which is not used / needed. however, that is only my personal opinion.

[manikk]

manikk, i am guessing the site is for a partner or family member, right? i like the intention, especially if you are trying to improve it for them.

i think the little hearts are a nice idea, but there are too many of them. the navigation of the site is not as simple as one would like (or at least myself), in regards to the little hearts, and the 'love', 'broken heart' and 'my valentine' floating little hearts.

also one last question: where does the money go to - you, like a donation; an organization; a charity; etc?

so to summarize, perhaps it needs to be simplified a little, and be less crowded with content which is not used / needed. however, that is only my personal opinion.

Thanks ...Fabiop...

Actually I`m not the owner of this site . . . This is just my first time to be worked in a fully dynamic flash site . . .

- Manikk

[Pasquale]

Do u think ****ing bunch is what people will want as critique, dont u feel ashamed of it, and in ur other posts, I saw similar words and u feel great of other person's critique as well as urs and u r commenting it with Icons. Think in a pig well, even a lion turns pig becos it eats only what we call human dungs, Ok, please dont put your dung in the forum posts and make other people to put the same. Ok.
HUH? I didn't understand any of that at all.:wt:

[balu_80]

HUH? I didn't understand any of that at all.:wt:

Manikk asked for his flash dynamic website critique, for which such a bad and unwanted words was arrived from similar person and he is so happy on other commenting on the same and he is posting with Icons which is absolutely not nice, so I told that person not to do that with a hasty words. But the Intension is very clear, just critizise saying that this has to be changed and that has to be changed or something which wont hurt anybody, which is what I meant. Hope this wont happen next time. RabBell has hurt very much with his nasty words and feeling proud of his comments, which really hurts. Just check out his website and critisize on it, but with clear and correct Uncensored words.

[balu_80]

Manikk, Happy that u have done a dynamic website with Flash. Its very nice but try to put Help link so that people can know how to navigate and what is the real theme of the website, now its so vague. Design aspects has to be worked on. Other wise fine and nice work, the website says its only half completed, try to make it full completed.

Tough Times never last but Tough People Do.

[balu_80]

:lol::lol::lol::lol::lol::lol::lol::lol::lol::lol: :lol::lol::lol::lol::lol:

:book: :book: :book: :book: - Read the website and give critique-:player: :player: :player: - See the website and critique -:evil: :evil: - Dont be a satan to kill any flash developer's Heart, its hurts a lot, ur critique should make the developers feel good, Ok, BoonDock, Hope so u will understand. Just give a Critique as something to be changed by ur view thats all he wants. Not ur Icons Ok

[balu_80]

that's just horrible... sorry, but it's horrible... bleh

Please Comment what is horrible in this website, Manikk really would be wanting it to avoid it.

[balu_80]

this is spam....you're advertising your site, you've not even read our comments about how ugly your site is, you're looking for people to sign up

You say 'By the way' as if oh I just had a thought but you're not looking for feedback from us you're only looking for members.

The most blatant piece of spam I ever did see.

What a great Comments and Critiques u have given. A great comment u have given to change, really God Knows ur heart and tell Manikk the Critiques and make him change it as ur like and then tell u. Just Check his website and give a Critique so that he will work on Improvise It Rab Bell. Dont Blame the Person who really wants ur Critiques. As his message he tells that he has done a New Flash Dynamic Site. Please, Please Dont hurt him, Its my Kind request.

[Flashthinker]

It's OK, but it lags.

[Pasquale]

What a great Comments and Critiques u have given. A great comment u have given to change, really God Knows ur heart and tell Manikk the Critiques and make him change it as ur like and then tell u. Just Check his website and give a Critique so that he will work on Improvise It Rab Bell. Dont Blame the Person who really wants ur Critiques. As his message he tells that he has done a New Flash Dynamic Site. Please, Please Dont hurt him, Its my Kind request.

Ok no offense but I really am finding it difficult to understand anything you are saying...

Stop posting multiple times after each post, and stop complaining about other people's critiques.:sigh:

[lorren.biffin]

My turn! :)

balu: I think you need to calm it down a bit. You're acting like somebody just punched your grandma in the mouth or something. Not too many ppl here are going to take kindly to you calling us "Pigs" and saying something that sounded like "Spewing dung from our mouths"...Seriously, who says that. Pretty rude dude.

Manikk: I clicked your link and was scared away within 20 seconds. I'm not the first person to say it in this thread. TOO MANY HEARTS. Tone it down a bit. You can either do it, or forget about it. It's your choice, but don't get mad that the rest of us didn't get all giddy about your flying hearts and complex registration system.

You seem like you've got some talent. We'd love to have you around. Just a few things you've gotta keep in mind: 1) No spamming...i'm not saying you did, it's just a rule 2) No crying when somebody says they don't like something you posted. It happens around here and trust me, you'll get used to it. 3) If you're going to call somebody a name, make sure they understand what you're saying.

Welcome to the critiques forum guys. I'd love to see this site again after you've made the changes we've suggested.

Good luck! ;)

[Pasquale]

^ great summary my man :)

[Fl4SH'ER]

Please Comment what is horrible in this website, Manikk really would be wanting it to avoid it.

It seems horrible because of the layout... the way things are put together, thoes hearts are simply anoying... the site is not appealing at all, and i feel it really busy... ni'm not even sure if flash was needed here... ok that heart animation needed flash, but it's nothing fancy or cool, it's just ugly... i mostly feel it ugly because of the layout, i like sites that have sleek/smooth layouts, detail, a.s.o. this is just off my style...

[biznuge]

that's just horrible... sorry, but it's horrible... bleh

Bleh indeed...:ex:

The site loaded and I felt a little bit of wee come out...:wt: OMFG

Sorry forgot the critique...

For a first time, fully dynamic site, it blows my first crack off the wrist out of the water.

But...

It's way too busy. i don't think after the minute or so I felt able to stare at it, I could have possibly seen everything that was going on.

Maybe sitting down, far away from the computer with a pen and paper, an idea of what's required from the project, and some reflection on the actual critical feedback you've received about the site, might do some real good here.

Couldn't figure out if the main 3D hearts rotation was linked in any way to my mouses position. seemed to be sometimes, and not at others.

Took a shot at stopping one of those little orbiting hearts, and it just plain annoyed me.


Hope this helps anyway.

and Balu-80... Please stop spamming. I can't figure out your exact point in one post, never mind 10 in a row.

my fingers hurt. gonna stop now..;P

[Syous]

You need to explain what is going, or what the purpose of the site is. Also, it needs a totally new design. Other than that you seem to have the knowledge of how to make a decent site.

[balu_80]

Bleh indeed...:ex:

The site loaded and I felt a little bit of wee come out...:wt: OMFG

Sorry forgot the critique...

For a first time, fully dynamic site, it blows my first crack off the wrist out of the water.

But...

It's way too busy. i don't think after the minute or so I felt able to stare at it, I could have possibly seen everything that was going on.

Maybe sitting down, far away from the computer with a pen and paper, an idea of what's required from the project, and some reflection on the actual critical feedback you've received about the site, might do some real good here.

Couldn't figure out if the main 3D hearts rotation was linked in any way to my mouses position. seemed to be sometimes, and not at others.

Took a shot at stopping one of those little orbiting hearts, and it just plain annoyed me.


Hope this helps anyway.

and Balu-80... Please stop spamming. I can't figure out your exact point in one post, never mind 10 in a row.

my fingers hurt. gonna stop now..;P

Ok, I am really sorry for my posts, but to be clear I had made a mistake and I appologise for it.