My Flash Drawn Cars

[vlforever]

http://www.anzdf.com/images/Lambo.png
http://www.anzdf.com/images/Modded Monaro.png
http://www.anzdf.com/images/Stock%20Monaro.png
http://www.anzdf.com/images/Torana Modded.png
http://www.anzdf.com/images/Walkinshaw.png

[mlk]

Hi there

good start i suppose; here are several things that are bugging me:

- the line thickness doesn't really help appreciating the hierarchy of the car components (your window lines are as thick as the contour). Line thickness is utterly important when creating 2d art

- some rims could use a lot more work

- the red car has different sized wheels, is that intended ?

- you should think about putting some black behind the car... As it is, your images look like 2d cutouts, especially in the area behind the wheels

- gradients are fun, but only when used appropriately...

hope this helps

mlk

[hybrid101]

very cartoony, love the first btw. lamborghini?

[Phenex]

@hybrid101: YES!!! it's a lambo! :P

@vlforever: No offense, but that is really "Flash 2"! You should try the same thing with the pen tool in Photoshop. It'll give you far better results. All the best for future projects :)

And yes, the lambo is the only one fairly correctly drawn among all those.