I need your critique!

[alirtah]

I need your critique in all kind to finish my work.
Please checkout this:

http://www.asp-co.ir

(Pictures of gallery not uploaded for now)


Thanks!

[ø]

wow, you've got lots of great features and kool stuff you can dooo and it doesn't look to aweful.
But for a construcion company site I think it's unessesairy(?) with all those features. Like the navigation and the gravity on/off. You don't really need that. What doesnt make the site better, should just be removed. You've gotta consider if everything is needed. What is, you keep, what is not, you throw away.

And the way all of the "windows" comes on top of each other, makes it all seem very untidy.

Getting my point?

But you've done a good job:)
Keep it up:thumb:

[kinow]

Very nice dude, you have great effects in this website. Congrats

[Starpromo]

Yeah some sweet stuff on there but there is just too much sweet stuff. You could drop half of the little add ons and it would still be as effective.

Im not sure on the intro either. I feel that it just wastes time and doesn't allow people to get to the info quick enough.

[brianmanden]

ohh oooohh typo on the front page ... experiance -> experience

[alirtah]

Thank you!

YES! I'm agree with you! That's too much for this website...!



Client wants a website with a different layout, so first I made the float menu on a blur background with an effect that when you drag menu you can see the main picture... A dynamic and float web site that you can see all menu together and we don't have page definition, everything is on the page at once, and an effect for exploring picture of background.

(anyway I avowal that this Idea is not working for this category -a construction Co.- very much, maybe it was better I improved projects gallery rather than this...;) )

...And then I put refresh button on stage for ordering the page and menus.

After testing the website I saw it's really untidy, but client was happy with float menus! They want it! And I had not enough time to expend more for this project! So I made gravity option to freeze menu and make stage static and ordered.

It was my story! Anyway I’m going to simplify project and the way that all of the "windows" don’t come on top of each other.

Thank you all and thank you brianmanden ;)

[herbiegrey]

I like the site

I also think there is too much to do on your site. As said before some of the features are just overkill.

The intro lasts far too long. There should be a skip button.

[Laalun]

I like it, but I'm not sure about the font. (I know I'm nit-picking!)