graphic critique

[dravalanche]

this something im playing around with for a poster. theres still heaps of work to be done ( hair + arms) but i thought i'd put it up

http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/4565/layout03fv4.jpg

[Pasquale]

:lol: looking cool man! I think the right hand needs more fingers. Add the epiglottis in too!

[hybrid101]

nice vectoring;)
wrinkles looking awkward though. so are the hands holding the two eyeballs;)

[dravalanche]

UPDATE
http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/7049/layout05cb5.jpg

[Pasquale]

nice man! now make the hair hairier!

[Jolly_Fat_Man]

wick on the left hand is under the hand...

Shouldn't the hand come out of the middle of the sockets?
Maybe I'm skewed... :trout:

You're still missing the little dangling bit in the mouth and possible tonsels.

The fire from the wick is red?! I'm guessing those eyeballs are bombs...

Looks great!:thumb:
Not my prefered style, but it's great! :thumb2:

[dravalanche]

wick on the left hand is under the hand...

Shouldn't the hand come out of the middle of the sockets?
Maybe I'm skewed... :trout:

You're still missing the little dangling bit in the mouth and possible tonsels.

The fire from the wick is red?! I'm guessing those eyeballs are bombs...

Looks great!:thumb:
Not my prefered style, but it's great! :thumb2:

nah the eyeballs are just eyeballs, not bombs

[dravalanche]

http://img401.imageshack.us/img401/2365/layout06qt2.jpg

[cubed]

make the hair lines go the other way.

[Absent]

Pretty good. But um... maybe you could thicken the inks/line art especially the outlines that would give your poster more graphical punch

[dravalanche]

http://img112.imageshack.us/img112/4629/layout07qz6.jpg

[fasterthanlight™]

Awww I wish there was more blood and guts dripping from the eyes, and spurting from the eye sockets

*edit. yea your eye sockets need a ton of work

[Pasquale]

Add shades of grey and stuff to give it depth :)

[dravalanche]

Awww I wish there was more blood and guts dripping from the eyes, and spurting from the eye sockets



how crass:stunned:

[dravalanche]

eye socket updates comin soon, here's it with text n junk
http://img518.imageshack.us/img518/9899/layout03dn5.jpg

[kmria]

Wow, that looks wikid. as fasterthanlight said, I would love to see more blood.
Also the hair wouldn't stay down if he is pulling his eyes out ;)

bad joke. look amazing. great work

[dravalanche]

Wow, that looks wikid. as fasterthanlight said, I would love to see more blood.
Also the hair wouldn't stay down if he is pulling his eyes out ;)

bad joke. look amazing. great work


cheers, the text layout and coloring is givin me a head though :(

[dravalanche]

update! (with extra blood)

http://img256.imageshack.us/img256/8815/layout07ry8.jpg

[Pasquale]

BAHAHAH gold!

Add more blood flowing along the path that the arms move in :D

[dravalanche]

more blood! ( but not too much)
http://img475.imageshack.us/img475/9324/layout10fr6.jpg

[paddy.]

Awesome. I want to go. :D

[REEF·]

You're style is so amazing! You're the guy that did the other poster for the rock band with the green mohawk right? Love the little progress updates btw. I think everythings pretty good right now. I just would like to see his hair a little more "shocked" (not electrically) from whats happening to his eyes, like a little more pointy maybe, if that makes sense.

[dravalanche]

You're style is so amazing! You're the guy that did the other poster for the rock band with the green mohawk right? Love the little progress updates btw. I think everythings pretty good right now. I just would like to see his hair a little more "shocked" (not electrically) from whats happening to his eyes, like a little more pointy maybe, if that makes sense.

yeah i did the mohawk one, I REALLY hate that poster now. The line work is really bland and the character design was terrible. I'm a bit prouder of this one but I reckon it could be alot better especially composition wise. Unfortunately I just had so send the final off.:td: i would of loved one more day working on it.

here's what i sent.

http://img253.imageshack.us/img253/7633/layoutfinalwebel4.jpg

[Pasquale]

Yeah dude this one is tight :D- we should do a collab on something some time.