can u give me ur opinion on this work?

[trabucles]

its a sample I made to a person who wants a logo for the word bingo, which one you think its better and suits more to the bingo/casino theme. Also, how much should I charge, I often do websites but not logos.

SAMPLE PICTURE (http://gomezluis.com/bingos.jpg)

Thanks for your time ! :ex:

[duncanhall]

I'd definately stick with one of the ones on the right, the ommission of the "o" doesn't quite cut it for me. I think i prefer the green one overall.

[REEF·]

green or black on the right are the best.

i read "bing dice" on the left ones.

[.michael]

I'd go with the ones on the right as well. Also .. the soft fade from the word BINGO, to the two cards behind it doesn't blend well—it's actually distracting. I wouldn't feather the word BiNGO, I'd make it a hard-line. It especially stands out on theh black.

[fasterthanlight™]

Ya i really really really don't like how the cards 'fade' out from the solid outline

Plus you can find a cleaner font than this, one with consistent letter heights too... unless youre going for a "binGO" effect, make it more obvious that the GO is supposed to be bigger.
(that B really aggravates my eyes)

I have a feeling you created these letters yourself, if thats the case, leave that to the pros, it may sound harsh, but your letters (ie your N) don't even have consistent bar widths

[dec27]

I would say the right side... the black one!
I also think you need to work the font issue.

:smirk:

[fasterthanlight™]

also, your dice aren't perfect squares... work on your perspective

[simplistik]

pretty decent... dice look funky and should have thicker stroked lines... also I like the type of font... a blocked serif, it looks good... but that specific font is trash. The B and G look horrible. Drop the cards too

[trabucles]

ok, I made changes to the logo...

www.gomezluis.com/all.swf

[REEF·]

Im digging 2, minus the cards.

[ronnie]

It's kind of odd to have the word BINGO with cards and dice. I like number 2 but I'd like to see the thin outlines for the G and O continue around the letters and the bold outline continue around the cards. Oh, and maybe nudge the cards up a bit so the diamond isn't cut off so soon. And as long as I'm in crit mode, the dice really need to be redrawn cleaner.
HTH

[nige1980]

Just a random question but what do dice and cards have to do with bingo? Unless I am missing something bingo is eyes down and numbers called out!!

Maybe change dice/cards to a lottery ball with a number in it?

Just my 98 cents change from a dollar

[leisuresuitlissy]

I agree with nige 1980. Logo looks a bit casinoey. And not crazy about the font.

[trabucles]

i made new changes based on some of your comments, it ended something like this.

http://gomezluis.com/corregidoultimo.swf (http://gomezluis.com/corregidoultimo.swf)

[fasterthanlight™]

Again, re draw your dice, they're very sloppy

The dice behind the G needs to be moved around, the dots are melding with the shape of the G weirdly

[Pasquale]

The dots need a bit of reshaping as well :P