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modelreject
January 24th, 2007, 02:28 PM
Hi all,
Need a bit of a crit.
The real problem here are the headers. Not sure if the work being that light grey. It works in the sense that it doesn't detract from the look but there's just something!?!


www.buildrebuild.com/kode.jpg

Thx for tips and advice in advance(oh yes... and the destructive criticism lol)
CB

travis
January 24th, 2007, 08:53 PM
Looks fine to me, I like it.

duncanhall
January 25th, 2007, 06:26 AM
I also like it and wouldn't say there's much wrong with it. Perhaps use some of the green in the headers and have a different colour for each page.

Jolly_Fat_Man
January 25th, 2007, 06:36 AM
I likes it!

If you can make the button have some effect on hover, that would be great.
Something in the lines of the logo.

matthewjumps
January 25th, 2007, 07:54 AM
not bad.

only thing i dont like is the face - doesnt seem to work to me.

oh and that hand with the palm or watever it is in the bright area - i reckon it would be better without it.

Starpromo
January 25th, 2007, 08:38 AM
Agree with Matthew there. That would be much better without the hand.

skepticstudios
January 25th, 2007, 08:56 AM
I like it, but the hand must go

Jr.canest
January 25th, 2007, 01:18 PM
i like it, just tell us when u have the animation ready
want to see it

Icy Penguin
January 25th, 2007, 06:33 PM
I like it - but you are right - the header kind of detracts from the site too much - maybe reduce the size of the header by at least half.

Looking great otherwise, looking for ward to seeing the final product!

tedc
January 25th, 2007, 08:22 PM
the problem for me isnt the header, its the font you're using in the logo... kind of clunky

REEFˇ
January 25th, 2007, 08:47 PM
is that hand holding an iPhone!?

RadioactveChimp
January 25th, 2007, 09:58 PM
^^ Hahah

I don't like the header, it looks like you combined too many found images and it looks strange/overcrowded. Birds are ok...get rid of the face and phone.

lorren.biffin
January 25th, 2007, 11:26 PM
Haha, I actually love it. This is usually not my style(it's a VERY overused style) but i think you pulled it off.

Good work.

And BTW, it looks 100x better than the last version.

EDIT: on second look, the aliasing in the logo looks odd. You might have to recreate the logo as a vector smart object to keep reusing it like that.

minthu
January 26th, 2007, 04:07 AM
Is that for a blog site? looks good! what is that graphic in the right side of the header?

Pasquale
January 26th, 2007, 04:19 AM
Not feeling the header, ditch the dude, and just continue with the mountains. I like the nav though.

modelreject
January 27th, 2007, 07:16 AM
Thx everyone.
Haven't been on the forums for a few days.
Will get on to addressing some points that I agree with:
1. The font for the logo is a bit klunky. Any ideas of a suitable one?
2. The images in the header do look thrown together. Got get my photoshop skills together.
3. The hand image.
4. Looks very bland when I take away the images people have suggested.

Best,
CB

modelreject
January 27th, 2007, 12:42 PM
Here's a small redo.

http://www.buildrebuild.com/kodeTest.jpg

The colours of the birds will replace the green on "About", "Portfolio" etc.
Logo is altered slightly.
Still can't find a font appropriate for the logo.

CB

REEFˇ
January 27th, 2007, 12:45 PM
woohoo, i like it! maybe capitalize the logo? i dont know, if you cant find a good font from dafont.com your font styles might be the problem. try different things with it in the font controls.