Boon's 2nd Entry

[BoonDock]

http://www.phoenixwave.com/sig2.jpg

2nd entry! :thumb:

Great competition!

[Fl4SH'ER]

looks great ! good job :thumb2:

[TheRealAlan]

Nice, i like it.

The only thing i would change is i think that adding some breathing room around the wings would make it look a little nicer. Just shrinking the wings a hair and adding three or four pixels of space between it and the border would do it for me. Just my critique. I really like the upper left.

[BoonDock]

I'll take that to heart and adjust it accordingly. Thanks for the advice. ;)

[TheRealAlan]

Or - another idea - you could make the wings larger and have them go off the page a little.

I'm not saying to necessarily do any of my suggestions, i'm just throwing my thoughts out there and it's all open to opinion. I hope you don't think i'm saying 'it sucks, do this!' I really like it and i'm just typing my thoughts. I am a graphic designer but i'm definitely not an expert.