Small christmas card

[berkoWitZ]

Hello, I`m making this christmas card for a client, please take a look and tell me what can I change and improve, I used the good old trapcode particular effects :) sizes, sound, whatever, thanks!

http://www.gci-ing.com/tarjeta/

[Stratification]

Looks very nice, I'd actually bump the whole thing up the page just a touch. It feels a bit too low to me. Aside from that I can't see much to change.

[JoshuaJonah]

was all that pre-loading just for the music? Maybe dropping the kbps a tad couldn't hurt for the sake of a few seconds shaved off.

[BoonDock]

Yeah you could probably drop the quality of the music to get that to load a bit quicker - otherwise I thought it was simple and to the point ... I like the flame on the candle to the right.

[swedemily]

for the entire length of the card, i thought the two christmas bulbs to the left were bulbs of garlic.:geek: also, the blur on the leaves under the candle looks strange, plus it casts no shadow like the bulbs. the card itself is spiffy though.

[Pasquale]

IS the burst of bublle things dynamic?

[RadioactveChimp]

the shadow on the bulbs looks a little odd and the red candle has no visible flame

[built_by]

long load for something so short, looks pretty nice though, the shadows around it could use a bit of a face lift though.

[Jeff Wheeler]

I love the candle… it's great. Load time was fine for me; I didn't even notice it.

I love it… very good job. Only thing I noticed was the ugly gray of the text to the left of the logo at the end.

[intrudah]

very impressive

id only change the leaves on the right if possible

[berkoWitZ]

Thanks for the comments :)

darkmotion: Nope, they´re prerendered in after effects and then import into flash.

Ok, problem 1: the loading, long...I`ll work on it to make it as small as possible, I think I can do it.

problem 2: Shadows, always have problems with shadows :P I`ll try to improve them.

The gray text at the end next to the logo can`t do much about it :( they like it that way, I already told them.

[SimplyArun]

Love it! Great work!! :love:

Other than what the others have pointed out, the leaves and red candle at the right need some work.

Also, could you translate that for non-Spanish folks here?

[berkoWitZ]

:D no problem, it`s a very to the point message:

At this season (or time of the year)....
on behalf of the GCI Engineering Team...
we like to thank you for being part of our family...
and wish you...
a Merry Christmas.

Something like that :)

[rondog]

very nice..I like the particle effects :)

[SimplyArun]

:D no problem, it`s a very to the point message:

At this season (or time of the year)....
on behalf of the GCI Engineering Team...
we like to thank you for being part of our family...
and wish you...
a Merry Christmas.

Something like that :)

Mucho Gracias!

[berkoWitZ]

You´re welcome..!