Flash website waiting for comments

[mansonivan]

http://www.mansonivan.frih.net/
this is a flash website which still in developing. I just cant wait to publish it. Please dont mind to give me ur comments. I cant improve without ur comments. :P Thanx

[SimplyArun]

Guess this is your first effort in making a Flash site. You've got something going but you have great scope for improvement. Right now it appears very plain and not really appealing. Try googling for 'design principles' & similar stuff and learn something about colours, space, texture, balance, etc... Look at other good websites and analyze their design, content and code. Kirupa SOTW - Site Of The Week is a great place to start.

All the best and hope to see some great work from you :thumb2:

[hybrid101]

hey man, i do agree with SimplyArun. we know you could do better. so far, the site isn't really that good as i see it. definitely needs improvement.

[DDD]

Never use template buttons. too many different things and colors going on. I too would say look into design principal basics. I recommend color harmonies (Triads, complementaries...) and organizational principals. The main thing I see lacking is focus and the design basics. You have the mechaics down to a good foundation.

I do like the sound button animation :thumb2:

[varecha]

yes i agree this site needs a lot of improvement, but if this is your first site u can be quite proud of u, i liked the sound button too, nice :)

[nrirureta]

there's a lot of white space and different parts of the site don't blend very well together ... it's like you took some part from somewhere and the other part from another place and glued them together ...

but it's a very good start and i'd suggest to try some web layout photoshop tutorials ...

:)

[mansonivan]

thanx everyone. I know i do need a lot improvement in this. Thanx for all comments. i appreciate it. I will keep doing~ :)

[Pasquale]

The colours don't work as well as they should because you don't use them in the right place. It all looks thrown together. First work out a structure, and then make something that compliment it effectively. :)