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cmxd
May 25th, 2003, 10:19 PM
Hi dudes,

What about this one.

www.valid.com.pk Thanks

jedimasterkawa
May 25th, 2003, 11:43 PM
Very nice. :) Good Work.

eyeinfinitude
May 26th, 2003, 05:31 AM
Nice colors, but the overall design is inconsistent. There are a lot of negative spaces and the layout shifts and changes from each section. For example the navbar jumps from the center to the top.

asphaltcowboy
May 26th, 2003, 09:50 AM
catalogue is spelt catalogue btw ;)

chris9902
May 27th, 2003, 08:17 PM
Originally posted by asphaltcowboy
catalogue is spelt catalogue btw ;)

i don't get it:-\

replode
May 27th, 2003, 08:30 PM
in the contact section, im guessing what's supposed to be the submit button after the form is blank.

teet
May 27th, 2003, 10:02 PM
asphaltcowboy is saying you spelled "catalogue" incorrectly.

you spelled it as "catalouge" instead of "catalogue" on the navigation bar

you also spelled "procucts" instead of "products"

i think your layout is fine...it looks very professional. i must point out that the flash on the "home" page is adding very little though. i would say, either scrap the flash and just go with a straight HTML site or do something more with it. you can get a little drop down menu for products using DHTML...check out http://www.dynamicdrive.com for some great scripts.

-teet

teet
May 27th, 2003, 10:03 PM
oh just saw something else

the title of most of your pages is "valid_next.gif" you'll prolly want to change that.

-teet

blackpulp
May 31st, 2003, 09:11 PM
hmmm...i would try and get your menu text a lil more readable...thats always important to me...it looked a little pixelated and blurry...just a thought.

sketcher
May 31st, 2003, 09:30 PM
another syntax bug:

under the "ABOUT US" page you have the following:

"As a member of the global village we view the world from the widest prospective"

prospective should read ' perspective'.

In the same paragraph, you wrote:

"How we response our customers, influence their belief in our commitment to them."

I can't be absolutely sure of your intentions, but I 'think' that you meant to write something like this...

"How we respond to our customers influences their belief in our commitment to them."

Regardles, good work.

Voetsjoeba
June 1st, 2003, 02:16 AM
Not bad, although it is correct what EG, teet and sketcher said. It full of spelling errors: Procucts, Catalouge, ... That makes it's professionality go way down. You might wanna consider using a frameset too so the top navbar shouldn't keep reloading.

I had the funny feeling that it wasn't done reloading yet when it was.

cmxd
June 1st, 2003, 04:47 PM
Hi dudes,

I really admire your comments and pointing out
my mistakes that I take positivly. Thanks again.

Best Regards
Sajjad
CMXD.studios.CodeMasters & xTreme deZinerz
www.cmxd.com