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Phizzle
December 1st, 2006, 07:06 PM
Hi, this is my first post. And this is my first building. I have done pixel art before so this isn't new to me. This is a hotel that is mostly covered in glass and is shaped like a square-base pyramid as you can see. Please post comments, thanks.
nicholas87
December 1st, 2006, 09:39 PM
Maybe add a sign or make the entire pyramid out of glass, that'd be neat. Other than that, nice pixels!!!
btw WELCOME!!!!!
Phizzle
December 1st, 2006, 11:37 PM
If I would add a sign, what whould it be like? I also like the idea of making it entirely of out glass. I'll try that.
Thanks for the welcome~
mnkeymasta
December 2nd, 2006, 01:59 AM
Pretty cool, but 2 things.
First of all, the doors and the "base" of the triangle are different, it looks like you ripped off an office building and slapped it right on to your hotel there... in other words you need to add a cube to the door so it looks more natural... or something...
2. A little glare on the glass would be nice!
3. Very well done!
Phizzle
December 2nd, 2006, 10:59 AM
Thanks. I kinda don't understand what you mean by "you need to add a cube to the door so it looks more natural... or something...". Other than that, I tried a glare before posting it and it lokked horrible. But I 'll try it again I guess. Thanks for the comments!
ø
December 2nd, 2006, 11:25 AM
I don't know if this is what mokey meant, but maybe. The doors are straight right.. and the wall are skewed. So it doesnt look so natural. Try to add a piece of wall that sort of sticks out where the doors are. Understand?
Other than that, good job and welcome:)
Phizzle
December 2nd, 2006, 07:09 PM
After looking at it for 5 seconds, now I understand what you mean. The doors are too straight and dont' fit the walls because the walls a kinda diagonal. Thanks, I'll fix it.
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January 19th, 2007, 10:24 AM
Looks pretty cool
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