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mongushu
November 10th, 2006, 01:08 PM
hello again.

here's a site i just finished for a friend. The content up right now is mostly filler. There is a custom xml-driven calendar for live-show dates, xml-driven news/bio/images pages, and an onscreen drum machine to be used with your keyboard.

the drum animations are a little choppy (i used lmc_tween library) so any advice there would be helpful.

thanks guys!

www.the-abstract-life.com/anomieGreen/

-mongushu

travis
November 11th, 2006, 03:44 AM
Not bad, it's a good start, but you need to do lots of work on the text-very hard to read.

ø
November 11th, 2006, 06:07 AM
There's a lot to say here. Umm..

You don't need the enter-site-site:p
The bg of the enter site, is not very pretty. And it makes the text a lot harder to read.
Change the font like travis said. It's very hard to read.
All of your images has very low quality, which makes it look bad.
On the news section, the text on the "prev" and "next" buttons looks off.
And what's with the merch thing?

Hmm thats just some of my thoughts!