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Qued
November 6th, 2006, 02:50 AM
ok im not redoing my site I just made up a new one because I was bored, http://www.mike-db.com/simple/ what do you think?

mlk
November 6th, 2006, 07:37 AM
Am I missing something or do you have nothing to show ?

(btw it's spelled 'description')

ø
November 6th, 2006, 08:27 AM
Yea its pretty... simple:P
Not much to critique really. Looks alright - but what can I say!?

acc
November 6th, 2006, 09:14 AM
nothing much to critique there yet, but for your future development, I'd like to see that illustration or graphics at the top to be more elaborate, I think it'll look nice if you add more to it, not too much, but a little more, to add flow.

And I know, this is the beginning stage, but for some reason, my eye searches for colour for a punch into the design, but yeah, it's a pretty basic layout, I think.

JoshuaJonah
November 6th, 2006, 09:50 AM
nothing much to critique there yet, but for your future development, I'd like to see some pink.

Qued
November 6th, 2006, 10:14 AM
Thanks everyone. :P I think I already have enough pink on my current site.

acc
November 6th, 2006, 10:20 AM
nothing much to critique there yet, but for your future development, I'd like to see some pink.

I was actually thinking of pink too, but if you don't want to go with pink, i think a nice yellow green kind of colour would be nice too.

squan
November 6th, 2006, 10:45 AM
I was actually thinking of pink too, but if you don't want to go with pink, i think a nice yellow green kind of colour would be nice too.

In other words, trendwh*recolor 1 or trendwh*recolor 2.

Denise032
November 6th, 2006, 11:54 AM
Bio: I like being a doe because they use this name for dead people they find that have no ID.

^I'm sure it's a joke, but just in case it's not...I'd consider revising a tad. lol :-P

Anyways..like every1 else has stated, not much to crit...good start but yea more color. ;)

chriskalani
November 6th, 2006, 01:19 PM
what is it?

built_by
November 6th, 2006, 03:07 PM
like i said before, you need to put more time into your designs.

Qued
November 6th, 2006, 06:36 PM
what is it?
What type of question is that?

CriTiCeRz
November 6th, 2006, 07:11 PM
What type of question is that?
What's wrong with that question?

Qued
November 6th, 2006, 08:26 PM
"What is it" I'm quite sure that was answered when I started the thread.
I also added a pink fade.

built_by
November 7th, 2006, 01:09 AM
work off that pink but make it lighter and brigher. it's more of a purple on my screen than anything else. i would also consider moving your logo thing to the other side, it feels empty on the right. with time it will be a lot better than what you got.

ø
November 7th, 2006, 03:13 AM
I agree with above. Make the pink less purple'ish. And I suggest you remove the gradient on the top. Or do something else with the logo. I think it looks awkward with the logo above the gradient as it is now.

Qued
November 7th, 2006, 09:57 AM
Alright.