I want you to critique me please

[cenapibo]

l have been working on a site for a while. It didnt take me a long while but l changed many times. and here you are... l really dont want to say it is good but it means l am improving.
all ciritique will be appreciated. thanks a lot. By Kirupa l have found the right way thanks also for everyone who takes part in this forum.

http://www.grafiktasarim.net/hedese

[sepu]

hey
a few thing
I think that showroom that you have there is kind of anoying, too many thing moving at the smae time you dont know where to focus, so I will kill that showroom maybe change it for something else. The highlight for the name of the comany I think you dont need it, up to you though.
I guess you will center the site and will put a bg.
About the colors there arent bad, not the best but it seems to work fine with the site.
in the portfolio section when you scroll the text its showing behind the text that said 'Portfolio' I wouldnt do that I will try to kill before that.
that's for now

[CriTiCeRz]

Umm.. the sound thing doesn't work right. Like it turns off when you click the little bars, not the off button. It was a pain to turn it off, so I exited.

[t0mm0]

i like the simplicity of the loader

[ø]

the enter page is horrible IMO.
And the sound loop is'nt very good.
But other than that, good job!:)

[evildrummer]

you need better sound, the enter screen made me blind! make the red dull'er, oh and I dont like the sacn lines but if you do keep them atleast make the colour less stand'y-out'ish other than that, pretty good.

[built_by]

i'm not sure i exactly like the nav in the middle. I would suggest using one shade of red or atleast ones that go together a little more.

[ApixDesigns]

it seems like 2 styles clash. the site is pretty funky/modern, while the chairs and stuff seem to be more elegant. they dont seem to fit well imho

[SimplyArun]

needs work on the colors and the style.
Otherwise it's well made