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bashR
October 26th, 2006, 11:25 PM
Im designing for this death notes anime website. Death notes is a new anime show, its actually pretty cool. Anyway, here's the layout http://img216.imageshack.us/my.php?image=deathnoteur9.jpg i need MAD critiques be as mean and rough as you can. i only come to this site to post my work because Kirupa.com has some good talent, and good members :)

hybrid101
October 27th, 2006, 09:30 AM
latest releases bar is kinda off.
i like the anime, colors look cool, nav is pretty ok,the deathnote font pwns(what is that?)
but for some reason, i think the bottom is too empty. good job for now;)

fasterthanlight™
October 27th, 2006, 09:37 AM
Theres some wierd background image behind latest releases chunk and the downloads... you can't see much of it and what you CAN see is impossible to decipher/understand what the truck it is. Its kind of orangey red. Ditch it

I say drop in the content and design it, then we can give you better critiques, because ANYone can design a layout, but designing the content is what counts

bashR
October 27th, 2006, 09:12 PM
Aight thanks for the comments. i'll get straight to it. im thinking of re-doing the whole thing to make it more CSS friendly. The death note thing isn't a font, its the animes logo.

lorren.biffin
October 27th, 2006, 10:41 PM
Why is the whole page one big link that points to imageshack?



...*chirp chirp*...


...*boooo :(*...




Wow, there's my stupid joke for the night. Anywho, it's not too bad. I guess for an anime site i could say good job, but it's clearly not finished...not to mention i dont like anime so i'm somewhat biased.

bashR
October 28th, 2006, 01:46 AM
New Version

http://www.kirupa.com/forum/showthread.php?p=1987115#post1987115