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Icy Penguin
October 18th, 2006, 02:45 AM
Hello all...

Well it's finally done (my html site (http://icypenguin.ca/eng/html/index.htm)).

I'm still working out a few minor bugs, but the site is ready in time for my bday today :).

I don't think I'll be changing much else on the site - except for the content - which kind of sucks at the moment :D.

So just looking for some crits and comms.

Thanks again!

nobody
October 18th, 2006, 02:55 AM
It's alright. Looks just like every other blog out there though. I'd put some more effort into personalizing it.

Icy Penguin
October 18th, 2006, 02:59 AM
Well I'll put my logo in there afterwards but that's all I was planning on.
I kind of wanted to go simple for this one, but what would you have in mind, perhaps?

And, well, it's not a blog - just a (temporary?) portfolio.
'Cause I'm working on my flash site (http://icypenguin.ca/eng/flash/index.htm) (might as well throw that one out there to see how I'm doing - just the beginnings of a WIP).

Thanks for the Cs. :)

nobody
October 18th, 2006, 03:01 AM
It's cool to go with the simple thing, but it seriously just looks like any other site, nothing distinguishes it. Perhaps a more interesting color scheme would help. It's worlds better than your old site you were posting, I just think it may have a ways to go. As far as your flash site, it looked extremely broken to me, so I'm not sure.

Vectortrance
October 18th, 2006, 03:08 AM
BOOO OILERS. (Flames fan)

The site is looking quite good, and the flash site you've got it linking to there will be really awesome once you've finished.

Icy Penguin
October 18th, 2006, 03:08 AM
Just developing my flash site - no design elements into that one yet.
Probably should wait a bit before I post it. :D

Btw, I really liked your new site - it is quite 'different' :D.

But yeah, I see where you're coming from. I'll sleep on it and see if I can come up with something.

Thanks again :)

Olli
October 18th, 2006, 03:57 AM
GO ANAHEIM! ;P
An vectorised icy penguin would fit very well there... I kinda waited it to load when I entered the page:P
otherwise kinda cool, but the lower (darker part) doesn't work on firefox...:/

Icy Penguin
October 18th, 2006, 01:07 PM
Yeah I just checked out the site today at school and I found a bunch of things that are broken. :(

And I can't FTP into my files right now so I have to wait.

And the Oilers are awesome. :)

Anogar
October 18th, 2006, 01:15 PM
I was thinking that it looked pretty good, and then I saw this:

http://icypenguin.ca/images/icy-penguin-logo.jpg

:wasted:

hybrid101
October 18th, 2006, 01:32 PM
looks clean and minimalistic, i pretty much like it, although it could use a logo;)

haam
October 18th, 2006, 05:52 PM
It's alright. Looks just like every other blog out there though. I'd put some more effort into personalizing it.

..and wtf is this:

http://icypenguin.ca/images/screenshots/icy-penguin-logo-one.jpg

:cantlook:

Icy Penguin
October 18th, 2006, 07:31 PM
:O
forgot to change that.
it was the WIP version of my logo
LOL.

that will be outta there. :D

DDD
October 18th, 2006, 07:38 PM
..and wtf is this:

http://icypenguin.ca/images/screenshots/icy-penguin-logo-one.jpg

:cantlook:
WTF :cantlook:

I think the site is your typical "cheese pizza". I dont dig it. But whatever finds your lost remote.

GPP
October 18th, 2006, 07:42 PM
EDIT: Oompa loompa.. :D

Icy Penguin
October 18th, 2006, 07:52 PM
No, it just took me like 30 seconds to draw it out in Photoshop since it was an idea.

I just forgot to take it out afterwards. :(

It seems I always have to defend myself whenever I post in here :puzzle: lol.

Nevertheless, would you guys have any suggestions so I can improve the site (since most of you find it boring and unoriginal)?

GPP
October 18th, 2006, 08:04 PM
You changed the image :fight:

Icy Penguin
October 18th, 2006, 08:07 PM
Well yeah it was getting kind of emberrassing. :blush:
I didn't think it was that big of a deal - it was just a quick image so that I could remember a possible idea for my logo. :/

built_by
October 19th, 2006, 12:40 AM
i dont mind it, maybe it would look better with more content

BoonDock
October 20th, 2006, 11:04 AM
After seeing the rest of your stuff that you have posted in the past - this is by far the best you have done and I compliment you on keeping at it! :thumb: With that said, I think that it's a bit bland and you could possibly do more with it - but bland isn't always a bad thing. It does look a lot like every other Blog thing you see ... but what can ya do. Anyways good job! and vast improvement! :thumb2:

aldomatic
October 20th, 2006, 11:43 AM
looks good.. simple and clean.. one thing, give your paragraphs some line height and maybe up the font-size a bit. keep up the good work :thumb:

Icy Penguin
October 20th, 2006, 05:24 PM
Thanks everyone for the comments. :)

Another question, should it take so long for google (http://www.google.ca/search?hl=en&q=icy+penguin)to have me up? Right now all it has is my splash page that was up about a month ago.
None of the other major engines have listed me yet.

aldomatic
October 20th, 2006, 06:09 PM
it might take some time for it to re-index it again.. be patient