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Flashthinker
October 7th, 2006, 12:20 AM
Well, since I got a lot of great feedback from it, I thought I might post it here.

I've been really creative... Although I wish I had added a nice background music and sound effects. Nevertheless. I'm fairly happy with the design.
A bit too much color for me... I had to make it colorful though so I did my best with what I had. (The purple is starting to get on my nerves though)

Here it is: http://www.whitsundayvoices.com.au/

hope the server isn't too slow... It seems okay today.

P.S. I made it for free for my school.

travis
October 7th, 2006, 12:28 AM
Nice work, alghough I'm not crazy about the colour purple, nice job.

evileks
October 7th, 2006, 01:05 AM
Nice effects, however I think the style needs work.

Kool Sites is for sites you think are kool, not your own. This should have been posted in the critique section.

booler
October 7th, 2006, 01:18 PM
I think the preloader needs to fit the color stlye of the site maybe a pruple instead of blue but other than that nice job

DariusMonsef
October 7th, 2006, 02:30 PM
It sounds like it is a finished piece, so here is some feedback for your next design.

SPLASH PAGES: Are only useful if they provide something to the user... a choice between two version (could be language, flash / HTML... etc.) If you have nothing on a splash page, but a click here button... all you accomplished was possibly losing the visitor to your site.

NAVIGATION: Unless I'm really interested in a site I won't play the guess what button takes you where game. Show the text for each section of the nav.

Cheers.