Work in progress

[Lounge]

Hey

I am in the middle of making this site, and would love some feedback/ideas/critique on my work so far. :rd:

http://wet-sites.ultrafishy.com/

Thx
Lounge

[ø]

I gotta say, that was very nice. The site worked very well and it looked nice:thumb:
The text was maybe a tad low quality'ish and Im not 100% about the font.
But all in all, really really nice:) The site had a good flow;)

[phorte]

Very nice actually. Simple yet effective. Colour scheme works well. As ø said, the font is a little hard to read, but its still is legible.
I would think maybe would want do do somtin a bit fancy on WebDesign section to justify the site being in flash. Maybe a kind of thumbnail zoom up effect would work well?
Im just saying that cause at the moment there are a lot of sites are made in flash that would actually look better in html. Not saying that yours would look better in html, just saying that the only really flash specific thing at the moment is the page fade.

Very nice work though. Looking forward to seeing it finished.

-Phorte

[hypnotoad]

Like the site, hate the font. Needs to be much less fussy. It looks like a Star Trek font.

[hybrid101]

looks great as is;) good job:thumb2:
but yeah, the fonts could use some fixing;)

[ApixDesigns]

hmmmm. well i have mixed feelings on this. i defintly dont like the navigation at all. i DO however like how the screenshots are displayed with that slight fade transition. i nkow its really easy to do, but its nice.

[bobbo0722]

You missed a little somethin on your 'home' button. When you click on it, it disappears for a frame. You just missed the down frame. Nice site overall.

[Lounge]

Hey

Thx for comments, bobbo good spot on the home button, could have been on there for years he he.


I made a bunch of changes and added the last pages. Link updated in original post

[hypnotoad]

Still need to change the font used in the titles and navigation, it's just wrong.

Also, it needs a bit of detail. It's essentially two black boxes on a dark grey background. It needs a logo or something to make it more appealing.

[SlowRoasted]

I think the typography is making the site look very noobish. You need a more professional look. Get rid of that gradient on the navigation bar also.

[cj2a]

Nice site...tho I agree with hypnotoad that you need something more as a design element...a logo element or something to add more visual interest initially. Your work looks good, BTW.

[Soudou]

On the Photography website description (on the Webdesign section) you say "detention" instead of "attention", just a heads up.
Overall I agree with the replies, it's simple yet effective but heading/navigation font I think should be smoother to fit with the mood of the site. Nice portfolio site though and nice work within it. Best of luck.

[Lounge]

Thankx for the nice comments, I am in the process of fixing the issues, and will upload more tomorrow. Soudou thanx for the spot