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Olli
September 27th, 2006, 11:25 AM
Hello to you all!
I just joined this forum and I've been watching it for a while now...
I noticed that some are able to give real good constructive critique...
My site:
http://olli.ilmari.damex.fi/


(I'm going to change the fonts a litlle lighter because some may have troble reading it...especially LCDs
And change so that the music doesn't start automaticly)
Thank you
Anogar
September 27th, 2006, 11:31 AM
Good start.

1. I read the oK logo as dK
2. I wish there was more page turning to do.

I think it's a good one. :)
DDD
September 27th, 2006, 11:41 AM
I rather like it. Although I instantly noticed the lack of a brand/logo. ANd I didnt notice the page turn deal right off the bat. I think you need more visuals, like some thumbnails for your work and maybe a description. So I would work on the presentation of your works. Right now its pretty flavorless, but a well done flavorless. <- Didnt know that was possible. :lol:
Olli
September 27th, 2006, 12:38 PM
Anogar:
1. Yeah I know it looks like dK but thats why the olli karvonen text is there;P, but true it's a problem when you resize it down....
2. I would not add more than 1 page turn if even that. cause then it would take too long to get to the last page... like on websitedesignawards: very disturbing if you wanted to quickly check something on the last page:/

DDD:
hah nicely said:p yeah about that description and thumb part was great!

thnx to both of you!
Sliker_Hawk
September 27th, 2006, 01:32 PM
Despite the trends, text with low contrast is not good. You might want to make it a bit brighter and put your logo (nice animation by the way) somewhere (other than the contact page).

I read the logo as oK, not dK...
DDD
September 27th, 2006, 01:43 PM
wait there is a logo?...I must have missed it...lol
Anogar
September 27th, 2006, 02:10 PM
It's on the 2nd page, and the Favicon. :lol:
Olli
September 27th, 2006, 03:06 PM
Despite the trends, text with low contrast is not good. You might want to make it a bit brighter and put your logo (nice animation by the way) somewhere (other than the contact page).

I read the logo as oK, not dK...
Yeah I mentioned it above.. I've been thinkin 'bout moving the logo but im not sure...
Thnx!

updated with some thumbs (not really that good but they will be there untill I change them)