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esnetni
September 23rd, 2006, 12:06 AM
I made another logo and I decided to just make a portfolio because I am not ready to make a big site, and I get can't get a lot of jobs because I don't have a portfolio so I made a logo for my portfolio.
Here its and thanks in advance for the critiques.
http://img102.imageshack.us/img102/6966/esnetnior9.gif

Jeff Wheeler
September 23rd, 2006, 12:29 AM
Isn't there a skateboard/shoe company that has a name similar to yours with a very similar logo? :-/

esnetni
September 23rd, 2006, 12:31 AM
really?
If someone knows about this please post it cause last thing I need is to get in trouble with that company.

B L U E
September 23rd, 2006, 12:31 AM
etnies (http://www.etnies.com/)?
esnetni is intense though :)

Jeff Wheeler
September 23rd, 2006, 12:34 AM
Yeah, etnies. I couldn't remember the name, but the “e” is very similar.

Pixelangry
September 23rd, 2006, 06:05 AM
But the logo looks nothing like etnies

ApixDesigns
September 23rd, 2006, 09:46 AM
the logos look nothing alike. and they are both for differnt types of comany. dont worry, you'll be fine. as for the logo. i already told you i liked it.

Jeff Wheeler
September 23rd, 2006, 10:22 AM
Heh, ok. It reminded me of it…

hybrid101
September 23rd, 2006, 11:04 AM
i like the font, but the logo...i don't get it:S

BoonDock
September 23rd, 2006, 01:20 PM
I'm not really feeling the logo. It seems forced and not flowing. (almost like it wants to be a infinite looking shape but can't quite make it ...) anyways do you have any other variations besides just color?

nobody
September 23rd, 2006, 01:39 PM
I agree, the e's look forced together and very unnatural. I don't like it. Work on fluidity if you want to improve it.

esnetni
September 23rd, 2006, 07:18 PM
Actually I got it fixed up http://www.esnetni.info (http://esnetni.info)
I have the new one on the splash page.
edit: I am changing the esnetni font because its fugly.
I am going to look for a better one.

hetlicht
September 23rd, 2006, 07:33 PM
Hi Esnetni,

I like the revision a lot and think it looks really great! :thumb: - The fixing of the E's now creates an interesting shape in the middle and now does not looked forced at all. Good luck with the building of the website. You are off to a GREAT start!

Cheers,

Hetlicht.

esnetni
September 23rd, 2006, 07:41 PM
I changed the font I think its looks better.
its on the site.

=guinness=
September 25th, 2006, 10:18 AM
it has potential but so far i am not super impressed, you should really take it into illustrator and work on the unification of the two letterforms. right now it just looks like someone flipped an 'e' (you may say "good, because that's just what i did") but every part of the mark should look intentional and right now the counter in the middle is close but not right on for the mark. i think that you should try and get a straighter counter between the two instead of the odd curve that is mirrored by the hook of the 'e'.

Anogar
September 25th, 2006, 11:21 AM
If I didn't know it was a set of E's I would be baffled at first. The logo is broken up by color - there are two shapes (which are not really E's at all...) and each one is a different color. You should make sure that those shapes are what you want.

This is your shape:

http://saveapixel.com/uploaded/51510709.jpg

Is that what you're going for?