My Commercial logo!

[lucid212]

Hello friends, it's my last work, this logo for fruit export company `orange, vegetables,.... i will finish my personal site nearly. and i'll post it
because your opinions is important for me. :)
http://geocities.com/dutch_delusion/ktbig.gif

[travis]

I like the orange, I think you could do somthing a bit better with the fonts.

[dec27]

I do think you can do somethng way better with the fonts and have you proved the way it looks smaller?

I'm afraid the fruit sroke is too thin… well, a thought!

[this.me]

to be honest i first tought about any serial (or how do you pronounce the word?) It looks a bit like a new kellogs product.. I think you can do better.:m2:

[Pasquale]

Hello friends, it's my last work, this logo for fruit export company `orange, vegetables,.... i will finish my personal site nearly. and i'll post it
because your opinions is important for me. :)
http://geocities.com/dutch_delusion/ktbig.gif
I really think it needs more work. Doesnt have any real form if you know what I mean? work with a reallyl basic shape and then pretty it up a little. ^that is not very "logo" like to me because of the many inconsitancies in shape and form.

Check out logopond.com if you are stuck for ideas :)

[RabBell]

good idea by darkmotion to check logopond.com...give you an idea on some more modern logos

to be honest though I like the orange, however I would suggest that you fill the orange (just making a whole orange) and then try a more subtle font...

the black fonts not too bad but I would consider changing it. The big problem is the red font, it looks like the Kellogs logo, it's gotta go

nice idea though and with a few tweaks this could still work :cool:

[hybrid101]

sorry, but i'm not liking it:(
make it simpler and smaller. i see gradients and a drop shadow,which should be avoided in logos:)

[lucid212]

Thanks for all sugessions,

Thanks darkmotion for logopond.com it's really helpful,
Sorry for my sterile logo. :cons:

[chriskalani]

For some reason it reminds me of Kelloggs...

[mpr]

Isn't Kellogg's logo a rooster? I don't see it.

As an initial idea I do like it. However, allow me to add my 2-bit opinions on it all:
1) I agree with the font, go a more stable route with that.
2) With the design, have more primary colours in it, say, a more solid orange and green. The pastel colours aren't very strong.
3) Thicken it up a bit. Those lines are too narrow giving what I think is a weak impression.
4) It looks as though you couldn't make up your mind as to where the words should go; in the design or out? Sticking out so far makes it seem incomplete for some reason. Try messing with different ways to place the company name. ex: completely in the orange or outside directly below, etc.

Other than that, good job I say.

[Digitalosophy]

I don't think it's bad at all, I do agree with the above comments ^^

Well done.