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hamsterfish
September 4th, 2006, 09:05 PM
Hello my name is brandon.
Im 16 years old.
I like web design.
I need some feed back on my test website.


Nothing right now work like buttons but I need feed back on the feel and the colors and the layout anything will be so much help
the url to the test is http://www.hamsterfish.net/tr2.html
thanks for everything

brandon
hamsterfish.net

dec27
September 4th, 2006, 09:29 PM
I think it is nice! :)

112am
September 4th, 2006, 09:47 PM
Nice font use ... I'll be checking back to see how this one turns out :thumb:

REEFˇ
September 4th, 2006, 09:48 PM
Nice website!

BTW: Any reason why you stated your age in the thread title?

travis
September 4th, 2006, 09:56 PM
Nice website!

BTW: Any reason why you stated your age in the thread title?
I think it was a "introduce myself here's my site" type of thing.

By the way, I like the site and I am anxious to see it completed!

Theros
September 4th, 2006, 10:01 PM
Nice site, however do clients worry about their developer's age a lot?

Also, is it just a picture? As of right now I see for no reason for it to be in flash... None of the links work :(

BoonDock
September 4th, 2006, 11:49 PM
16 and just getting started? Wow ... good luck in the future! You're well on your way!

Pasquale
September 5th, 2006, 02:31 AM
:) looking cool :)

Pixelangry
September 5th, 2006, 03:17 AM
I was a little confused by "Make your mark" i was expecting to be able to carve into the wood lol

hetlicht
September 5th, 2006, 04:04 AM
Wow man..for 16 you are seriously on a nice path!

Really like the layout and the font use! Can't wait to see this again!

Super nice work. :thumb2:

I believe he mentioned his age because if we didn't like it or before people posted comments ripping his work, we were to consider that he's only 16.


Cheers - hetlicht

ollie-
September 5th, 2006, 05:22 AM
Nice layout; really fresh! I have no real complaints other than the type treatment, especially in the 'bio' and 'news' sections. The bio text should be all aligned left with no indentation (like the first line) so that it is inline with the starting of 'theBIO'. The news and bio headers should be level with each other; try finding a middle ground between where they are now. I would also change the way the news section is laid out. As it stands the text size and colour don't really match with the rest of the site.

Hope this helps :) You've made a great start.

ApixDesigns
September 5th, 2006, 12:24 PM
Wow man..for 16 you are seriously on a nice path!

Really like the layout and the font use! Can't wait to see this again!

Super nice work. :thumb2:

I believe he mentioned his age because if we didn't like it or before people posted comments ripping his work, we were to consider that he's only 16.


Cheers - hetlicht

age is no excuse for ripping somoenes work.


nice. its very plain but it looks good. no need for it to be in flash and also i dont see any navigation?

Theros
September 5th, 2006, 12:33 PM
Guys, it's a picture?

hetlicht
September 5th, 2006, 01:25 PM
Wow man..for 16 you are seriously on a nice path!

Really like the layout and the font use! Can't wait to see this again!

Super nice work. :thumb2:

I believe he mentioned his age because if we didn't like it or before people posted comments ripping his work, we were to consider that he's only 16.


Cheers - hetlicht

age is no excuse for ripping somoenes work.


nice. its very plain but it looks good. no need for it to be in flash and also i dont see any navigation?
Can you please post a link to the site in which your accusation is based?

Thanks - hetlicht

simplistik
September 5th, 2006, 01:30 PM
Can you please post a link to the site in which your accusation is based?

Thanks - hetlicht
He didn't accuse anyone, if he had understood you correctly he would've prolly meant just cause he's 16 doesn't mean that we should go easy on him, but in his case... it he meant, just cause he's 16 doesn't mean he can rip someone off... he never said he did rip someone off. EITHER way... age shouldn't be a factor

Sliker_Hawk
September 5th, 2006, 01:31 PM
"I believe he mentioned his age because if we didn't like it or before people posted comments ripping his work, we were to consider that he's only 16."

Apix is just explaining that we wouldn't care if he was 16 if he had ripped the site. Apix isn't saying that he has ripped it.

EDIT: You beat me.

It looks okay, just a bit plain. And for some reason the background looks slightly green. I don't know if it actually is, but methinks it'd be better white.
I think the contrast on the font you've used on the lists and such is a bit too little. As in, you should probably make the text darker.

Templarian
September 5th, 2006, 01:51 PM
Nice look and clean feel. Should of just kept it simple with HTML CSS and some JS. Other than that nice.

hetlicht
September 5th, 2006, 02:08 PM
Thanks simplistik and Sliker_Hawk for the clarification...guess the grammatics got me there. :sigh: - Didn't realize ApixDesigns had not realized I meant being too harsh on the lad.


Cheers - hetlicht

nj_jcarter
September 5th, 2006, 02:21 PM
I don't mean to be a jerk... it does look nice. I don't doubt it's authenticity but I swear I've seen this site, almost exactly the same, before... done by someone else. I can't think of who but it was a Kirupa member. I can't be alone...

ApixDesigns
September 5th, 2006, 04:13 PM
kk thanks simp for clearing that up

Esherido
September 5th, 2006, 04:21 PM
Looks really smooth and simple. Actually it's inspired me for another desing I might make in a bit. Great work! :thumb2: