Logo needs to be improved

[e-sarbak]

Here is a logo I made for our school's fine arts festival. I tried to mention the spring theme with that logo. Maybe some more art concept is needed. I hope you can help me with that logo

http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/4774/untitled1jb9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Thanks...:)

[Esherido]

Does it say FAF? You might want to make it a bit easier to read a more recognizable. The little multicolored flower is a good idea and adds originality though.

[travis]

I think you can make it easer to read by moveing the left side of the A over so it touches the rest of the A, so it's a complete A.

[Vectortrance]

All in all its a good concept :)

[Digitalosophy]

All in all its a good concept :)

Agreed I like it!

[SPAD3S]

yes indeed i like it to chap

[leisuresuitlissy]

Yeah I like it too...agree with Travis though, perhaps move all the elements of the letters closer together so its a bit more readable.

[Seb Hughes]

It very nice, although it took me a while to make on ti was FAF, maybe put a bigegr space between each letter.

[chrisclick]

Its very colourful... I agree with Travis to make the elements together or bring them closer

[e-sarbak]

OK I improved the logo as you said.

http://img172.imageshack.us/img172/1337/untitled2nx1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Ohls]

The first one was far better if you ask me.

Just connect the middle line in the A and the lower horizontal line in F. Dont change the color and dont change the thickness and I think you got a nice easy readable logo =)

[e-sarbak]

Do you think it is too much fixed and lost its concept?

[applejelly]

The first one was better. Maybe two different "f"s?

[hetlicht]

The first one seemed more like that ancient Chinese character calligrahpy writing style you see the guys in the mall and at fairs doing. The name escapes me even though my mom owns several of these pieces.

I liked the first one more and the revised logo is not doing the original justice. Please see below what I believe Ohls intended in the critique or that I personally believe needs to be done with it.

The red blocks means you have a little more spacing in the "F"'s connectors than need be and maybe you can bring them in a bit, but I personally wouldn't attach them as you did in your last revised version.
The connector in the "A" doesn't bother me that much, but maybe I would also push that in about 14-21 pixels.

The fattening of the letters loses the nice effect you have going on.

It's a great logo! Very nice work! I will be happy to see how this turns out for you. Play with it and remember to have fun!:thumb2:

http://www.dlicht.com/revised.jpg

[hybrid101]

i like the concept and the logo itself a lot:)
great job;)

[Esherido]

I think hetlicht's comments is some fairly good advice, but I wouldn't push the F's lower horizontal lines in as much as he suggested. But still go with the new colors you're using in version 2.