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StoreKit
May 13th, 2003, 10:27 AM
My friends and I just finished this e-commerce extension for Flash MX. Please check it out, play with it and let me know what you think.
Thanks

StoreKit (http://www.storekit.com)

Kajinku
May 15th, 2003, 05:40 AM
Hm... I don't like it that much... the text is difficult to read, it's too small, too simple, too weird. Rethink the 'fantasy' art (lines and circle) on the splash page, it's not matching the background that well.

Try to bring more structure in your pages. Use a layout, not just a white rectangle with some text in it. Also, avoid light blue and black. Those are tricky colours to combine... sometimes it works, but most of the time it doesn't.

OK, now go for it! ;)

Dj.Stigma
May 16th, 2003, 12:14 AM
If you want to use flash, try to make it more animated. There is nothing going on your website and i just don't see why you had to build it in flash. Also, try to put a border around the whole website and center it. It's not too bad but it needs much more work.

peace

teet
May 16th, 2003, 12:40 AM
h o w c o m e y o u p u t s p a c e s i n b e t w e e n e v e r y l e t t e r ?

:)

-teet

teet
May 16th, 2003, 12:41 AM
oh yeah...the title of your page is "index1"

i'm not sure if you wanted it that way or not

-teet

StoreKit
May 16th, 2003, 01:19 AM
Hey guys thanks for all the feedback it really helps. I wiill post a new version of the site soon.

Thanks again.