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junkerjorg
August 18th, 2006, 11:01 AM
Ok, I am ready to be bashed and beaten down for my latest work. I have lost all creativity and need a boost and I know this is the right place to go. This is just a site I have been toying with, already plan on changing the navigation and there will be LOTS more content but I don't want to go much further if it is as ugly as I think. This is my first time so be gentle!

;P

http://www.junkerjorg.com/newSite.html

haam
August 18th, 2006, 11:05 AM
i think you should make your design a little more sharp. it's all kinda' blurry and ameture-ish right now.

i like your animation for the text section but i think the animation ahould happen before the text is seen. other wise there's just this shape swimming around behind the text for no reason.

nav buttons are extrememly unsharp, are those vector? you should make them vector if they aren't. if they are make sure you aren't on a decimal of a X or y value or size value, having decimals in those properties causes even vectors to blur sometimes.

edit: your logo needs to be replaced! the jagged edges are bad!

chriskalani
August 18th, 2006, 11:42 AM
the scroll bar is really ugly.

Anogar
August 18th, 2006, 11:53 AM
There is a lot of artifacting, the images seem to be of really poor quality. :-/

Jolly_Fat_Man
August 18th, 2006, 11:54 AM
You are P.A.W. ?
I think it could do with a shadow here, shine there, gradients around everywhere.

I like shinny things, so don't mind me...

ApixDesigns
August 18th, 2006, 12:31 PM
its OK. you have alot of empty space and like said before, the images seem to be pretty low quality. i dont like where it says professional | afforadable | web design. that just looks amatuer. i dont really like how the tabs are at the bottom either or that its ona slant. your off to a good start but need to refine some things.

junkerjorg
August 18th, 2006, 10:12 PM
Thanks everyone for the input and taking it easy on me! I was kinda going for a chiseled stone look with the heiroglyphs and things. I did have a vector scroller originally that had the appearance of being hand drawn (which they were). I'll see what I can come up with!

theflash
August 21st, 2006, 01:22 AM
I dont see menu text... scrollbar design is not good, only colors match with the theme.