Personal Portfolio v1

[ghjr]

Would love some critique on my first portfolio:
http://www.ghjunior.com/v1/

I hate the blurred text that's going on with the project descriptions, but I can't seem to straighten that out.

Cheers,
ghjr

[bwh2]

a few thoughts:

i see no need for flash
the email address looks like webdeveloper.greg@ghjunior.com
the scroll button is too subtle
i wish your name linked to the homepage
the launch button is too subtle
i wish the images could be enlarged

overall i think it's pretty good, just needs some tweaking.

[Anogar]

BWH summed it up pretty well. In addition, I find it a little bit mundane compared to what it could be. You have some impressive work, but the page isn't really very exciting. It lacks any color or visual interest, and while you've chosen to use Flash, you don't really have anything flashy going on. I think it needs some spice. :-/

[Esherido]

Needs some animation, things just appearing and dissapearing with little SciFi noises just isn't very interesting, give it some "spice" and interactivity to make it an original experience for the user.

[ApixDesigns]

yep bwh2. i see no need for flash here.

[ghjr]

Thnks guys! I'm starting over from scratch and will take all the tips into consideration. v2 here i come hehehe. :beam:

Cheers,
ghjr

[Anogar]

Good stuff. It's always cool when someone is willing to start over. :thumb2: