New to flash, need some comments

[christawatson]

Well, this is my first flash project and it is nothing like some of the EXCELLENT sites I have seen on here, but I would still like some comments either way. Just keep in mind I've only been doing this for like 2 weeks now (on and off) so.... ummmm,

The things missing are: sound, and the MC that plays when you press the home button is supposed to play in the very beginning, but I can't get it to work yet.

Ok, thanks for your input www.pru4corners.com/rockyourcareer.html (http://www.pru4corners.com/rockyourcareer.html)

[ø]

Thats actually pretty good for someone who have been doing flash for just 2 weeks:thumb:
Not bad at all. Some points to mention:
The contact form is really really small!
And The black background isn't to nice. I also think you maybe should center the site!?

But good start, indeed:D

-peace!

[chrisclick]

Its ok... Just a precentage on the loadbar and also when you enter the sales sign does not appear as if you click on the link for "home" the sales sign appears... easy to fix

-dizzy- just to let you know you win... I think :D

[Theros]

It's nice, however as of right now there's no need for it to be in flash. Also that menu you used is from a tutorial as I've used it once before :P... Also, blend the site into the page, as don't just leave a blue page hanging out in a black page. I like the background, however, what purpose do those animated lines do for you? Just a distraction.

[haam]

nothing wrong with your flash, good work.

however your design definately looks n00b-ish. keep up the good work. it'll get better :smirk:

[ApixDesigns]

the design might not be good but the functionality is good.

[christawatson]

Thanks for all the input! I'm making changes... (whenever I get free time) I know it doesn't have to be in flash but the franchise wanted it that way for the "high tech" feel. Again thanks, everybody's posts and sites on here are always so awesome! Thanks for all the tuts and comments!!!