ad design

[dravalanche]

Hi, Im doing a project for class where we have to pic a location and make a holiday ad for the location that would appeal to an upper market.

what do you think of mine so far? (it's still a work in progress) :D

http://img92.imageshack.us/img92/4028/luxurytestnt6.jpg

[Theros]

Looks, nice.... ROFL, I just went there lol..!

[dravalanche]

cheers, There's something about the bottom half the bugs me.

Possibly cause it's 12 in the morning and my brain could use sleep.:sleep:

[SPAD3S]

i like it but i hate ads....anyways it looks good so keep it up

[this.me]

Maybe too much empty red at the bottom maybe center the text and make it a bit smaller. (more photo). Not too small but just less empty space..

behind that it looks nice, nice colors, the red gives a sort of trust and warmth:disco: :kir:

[ApixDesigns]

i like it but i hate ads....anyways it looks good so keep it up

how can you hate ads? ads are everywhere. and without them you wouldnt know anything new...

nice job on the ad though. its very professional looking.

[Theros]

I'd say maybe there's a bit too much space on the bottom, and the text is hard to read but that's just cuz its a smaller pic

[dravalanche]

I shifted the text and the header around, change some colours and added some pics in to fill space ( im not sure if i like them though)

The bad thing is i have 24 hours to make another one of these targeted at a budget market. :cantlook:. I wish I did'nt have that week off class, dam stomach virus......

anyways tell me what you think.

http://img133.imageshack.us/img133/7611/luxurytest2vn5.jpg

[this.me]

the new pictures are too much. The whole idea is out of the ad. If you just decrease the red part so there is more mountain? in that case it keeps nice and stylish. the new pics makes it sort of cheap. I don't know how else to explane it all. I like the fist one better for sure

[hybrid101]

i like the second one a lot;)

[dravalanche]

hmm im still undecided, i think if I use better pics It might work.

[SPAD3S]

lol apix your right but i just dont like most like on myspace *cough *cough
:lol:

[dravalanche]

here's the budget poster I'm working on.

http://img97.imageshack.us/img97/6650/budgettestrk0.jpg
(http://www.kirupa.com/forum/newreply.php?do=newreply&noquote=1&p=1930510)

[dravalanche]

update :smirk:

http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/5183/budgettest2tt6.jpg

[dravalanche]

Final

http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/7148/luxuryfinaltestzh4.jpg

[Chel]

The final one looks good but those budget ones are kind of not so good. I think its the strage maple leafs.

[dravalanche]

http://img104.imageshack.us/img104/8827/budgettest3na4.jpg

[denizengt]

^ Clear ad, not a fan of the drop shadow having that kind of distance or even existing.

The price stands out very well - is this the aim?

[haam]

i like the image and a the feel of the First ad. It had space and now everything is cramped.

i really like your three call outs, they give me something to look at instead of just a text block.

[bwh2]

a couple of comments on the last one:

the vertical spacing in your $2999 section needs to be fixed
the asterisk in $2999 pp* doesn't lead anywhere
i would use "$2,999" instead of "$2999"
i would say "discount airfare" not "discounted airfaires". either way, spell check.
i think you meant to spell "capital" not "capitol"
point your plane going up and to the right. not down and to the left.
i would draw more attention to the contact info

[haam]

# point your plane going up and to the right. not down and to the left.
# i would draw more attention to the contact info

2 very good points. didn't even notice the plane's direction but yea...