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Sifodyas
July 27th, 2006, 08:28 PM
Hi folks,

I am looking for some critique and suggestions on my new creation. It is a site for a wedding filming service, which is run by a good freind of mine.

This is my first flash project (ever) and I have drawn on numerous sources for inspiration (dont we all :m2:) for both the code and graphics.

Much of it is still in dire need of polishing, so ignore the parts that seem unfinished, I am interested in what you feel when you visit the site, how the navigation seems, the speed of things, bugs and especially bugs.

The site is here (http://www.birkvideo.com/proof).

I look forward to the responses. :hair:

pomogranate
July 27th, 2006, 08:54 PM
Intro is a bit confusing and that gradient fill drives me insane
keep working :thumb:

Icy Penguin
July 27th, 2006, 09:19 PM
Preloader please!!!

The right-click context menu doesn't work as of yet, and maybe try a different background.
Also maybe make the rollover effects on the navigation go faster and put some ease on them.

Other than that, looking good.

Sifodyas
July 27th, 2006, 10:52 PM
I'll reconsider the Intro but the gradient is my pride 'n joy :crazy:

The context-menu is just temporary as I was just testing out the possibility of using it. I'll probably end up having a help menu in place of it all, and just the copyright message along side.

I had some issues with the preloader, because of the export in first frame, but this is now sorted.

Cheers.

Anogar
July 27th, 2006, 10:59 PM
It's ultra choppy on my computer. Also, the whole back and forth thing is nice, but the edges of each section are quite sharp, which makes it quite a bit less effective in my opinion.

Good start. :thumb2: