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nerdski
July 25th, 2006, 01:08 PM
Well here is a site I did for a client. He requested a template and I just changed it around a bit. But what I can't get is why the dynamic text in the "release" and "studio" pages are so small. And it seems to lag, will bumping up the frame rate speed it up?

http://www.alphadj.net/biosite.html

Anogar
July 25th, 2006, 01:13 PM
It's really smooth here. The font is ridiculously tiny on the pages you mentioned though, I can't read it even a little bit. Is it embedded? Is it finished? Some of the content seems to be missing - info on the artists, for example.

ApixDesigns
July 25th, 2006, 01:35 PM
nice site. i like the rollover on the buttons alot. i dont liek the font that is used for the sound button, that just looks tacky and unprofessional. try a nice pixel font or a system font.

nerdski
July 25th, 2006, 01:37 PM
It's really smooth here. The font is ridiculously tiny on the pages you mentioned though, I can't read it even a little bit. Is it embedded? Is it finished? Some of the content seems to be missing - info on the artists, for example.

Yeah I dunno how I can fix that, but I might think it might be my browser. I just know I have it set at dynamic text so it's able scroll. Yeah I know I'm missing stuff in the artist page this is still a work in progress.

Anogar
July 25th, 2006, 01:54 PM
It's probably your computer. Flash is actually rather CPU intensive sometimes. You need to embed that dynamic text, that will likely fix it.

fasterthanlight™
July 25th, 2006, 03:21 PM
Yes, embedding will cure all text ailments.
Looks pretty good from my initial browse through it... a little 'texty' ie too much text content and not enough pretty images. But solid nonetheless

JCPalmer
July 25th, 2006, 05:18 PM
Nice, um just a few suggestions. Font is unreadable on the studio and releases section. Also, artist doesnt work??

You could lessen the height of the buttons or try to fill them with something (do not increase the font size). There is just too much blank space there for my liking.

On section titles such as "downloads available:" you could seperate the colors of the underline to the font or space the font up one px to seperate it.

THe bottom BIOHAZARD symbol should be lightened as it doesn't look good on such a dark grey bg (or you can lighten that sections bg which would look pretty cool. You can do this for the buttons too and it would make the mid section stand out more.)


Fix the orb on the sound... I'd go to gotoandlearn.com and check out one of this tutorials labeled "flash 8 filters tutorial" its a good tutorial on how to make actionscripted orbs.

Move all the content up and put the copyright in. Also you could lower the sound level.

ø
July 25th, 2006, 05:22 PM
I dont think you sould have a sound on/off button that messes with the button sounds aswell. If I should use the site I would like to have the nice buttons sounds but not the music;)

juniorspecial
July 25th, 2006, 05:36 PM
That's a pretty nice site! I like how it opens up.

buckcee
July 26th, 2006, 02:51 PM
I like the overall feel of the website. Like others mentioned, you should fix that font, it's not readable. Also, I think it's better to disable mouse cursor for the artist thumbnails.

anardodesign
July 26th, 2006, 04:23 PM
I don't know, but for some reason this site scares me. I don't know it feels liek a template for some rason. :trout:

If is not for that, I like it a lot, I love the colors, and the transitions :)

fabiopb
May 24th, 2007, 09:28 AM
i love the whole site, no actual constructive criticism from my end that i can think of. the text is a little small to read, im using a 1680 x 1050 resolution.

could you guide me to how to make the scrollbars (custom and dynamic)

master_phat
May 24th, 2007, 11:23 AM
uh oh, you got "hacked".

hybrid101
May 24th, 2007, 01:19 PM
it lags a bit, and you should center it:D
but overall, i'm really liking it dude:D

cameron_
May 24th, 2007, 02:00 PM
the three bottom buttons look odd..they are toughing each other and the curve is different