personal logo...

[Denise032]

After lots of great advice from all who responded I've come up with two more logos over the past week. Very simple and flat (as suggested). Critique away! :)

#1 - http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v157/denise032/DS.jpg

and

#2- http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v157/denise032/dsquare.jpg

Old logo that received mixed reviews -
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v157/denise032/d-logo.jpg

Thanks!!:nerd:

[fasterthanlight™]

I disagree with #2

the font you use for 'denise' in #1 needs more style and ditch the "- -" on either side :thumb::thumb:

[Vexir]

# is terrible, glad you ditched the old one.

#1 has potential, but needs work. The middle font doesn't work with the brush/calligraphy type script in the background, and neither, as Faster pointed out, do the dashes. To be honest, just stick Denise under the letters D S and choose a good font for them. I would pick something thin and light but wide and widely spaced.

[Anogar]

I agree. I think #1 has potential, but needs some help. I think it would help if you defined, a bit, what your logo is for. Are you going to be doing design work? Embroidering it on a hat so that people know who you are? What exactly are you going for?

[RabBell]

just echoning everyone above but number 1 is the winner

remove the --'s and maybe think of adding a tad of colour (a tad mind)

but nice

[fasterthanlight™]

but its a logo comp rap, supposed to be in black and white, colour added after when you integrate it into your page

[chriskalani]

I don't get why humans need a logo...

[Anogar]

Most humans don't. Humans trying to sell something do. :thumb2:

[chriskalani]

you wish.

[Denise032]

I am doing this for my personal web design porfolio, and I might want to use it on a business card in the near future...

Cool, I'm gonna tweek that first one a bit and repost soon. #2 and the old one are ditched.

Yea on the color, as faster said, this is just black and white, not the actual colors of the logo. That was per a suggestion when I put that old logo up, and I think I understand why. :) Once I get the design locked up I'll add the color.

Thanks every1 once again for your input! U guys rock! :D

[bwh2]

the font used for the DS in #1 is the same one i've seen on hundreds of beer league softball jerseys. but i suppose of the three it's the least bad.

[theflash]

oh no! still does not work... try with some other good fonts...