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pablosci
July 19th, 2006, 01:17 PM
i just design this for a client at buenos aires
is a marketing agency for young musicians
dont know what you think about it

http://img66.imageshack.us/img66/3655/1gc8.th.jpg (http://img66.imageshack.us/my.php?image=1gc8.jpg)

http://img211.imageshack.us/img211/156/2pl0.th.jpg (http://img211.imageshack.us/my.php?image=2pl0.jpg)

http://img68.imageshack.us/img68/8325/3vy6.th.jpg (http://img68.imageshack.us/my.php?image=3vy6.jpg)

http://img69.imageshack.us/img69/8758/4jj2.th.jpg (http://img69.imageshack.us/my.php?image=4jj2.jpg)

Anogar
July 19th, 2006, 01:28 PM
Oh, I really want to see that in action. Great concept thus far. Get it running, I want to check it out!! :thumb2:

haam
July 19th, 2006, 02:06 PM
i really like the blurred backgrounds. will they be doing anything during the site or will they just stay blurred?

i think your potential layout is awesome. i love the way the blurred background gives the whole thing perspective.

however, i think the whole hands being used as cursors and to animate content in and out of a website is completely overdone at this point.

this is def. a cool looking design tho. looks like video.



ps: i'd loose or tighten up the golw around the edges of everything if i were you.

pablosci
July 19th, 2006, 03:40 PM
well the blurred background is gonna be changing everytime on every different section.
yeah haan, you r are right, those glow edges are not very good, im gonna see what to do. i really like this layout. if the client doesnt like it, i think a can re-adapt it to my site :D

haam
July 19th, 2006, 04:12 PM
haha awesome, i love reusing designs that clients are too stupid to choose!

that's cool that the backgrounds will change. the blur def. gives the feeling of perspective, you should keep that for sure.

post your updates i wanna' see this thing run.

simplistik
July 19th, 2006, 04:15 PM
Nice concept man, real nice, reminds me of Kamikadze... and I'm by no means saying it's a rip, but similar w/ the hands and what not.

I think the one thing that kinda sorta bothers me is when you have the content... is the abundance of hands, It's like the dude is Goro. And I def agree w/ haam about the blurs... to strong.

haam
July 19th, 2006, 04:17 PM
Nice concept man, real nice, reminds me of Kamikadze... and I'm by no means saying it's a rip, but similar w/ the hands and what not.

I think the one thing that kinda sorta bothers me is when you have the content... is the abundance of hands, It's like the dude is Goro. And I def agree w/ haam about the blurs... to strong.
for real! those hands are scary! :s:


edit: holy crap! i've never seen that kamakadze site before. that site is awesome! so creepy how the hands just come out of the black. i've never seen the hands being used from that perspective. dope site man.

pablosci
July 19th, 2006, 05:27 PM
thanks haan and simplistik for your comments
shure im gonna be posting the updates of this site

the client did not answer yet, and im getting very nervius if he is gonna acept this one or not.
if he accept it, im gonna start building the others layuot, if not, im gonna use on my site, coss i really like it.

OMG!
the kamikadze sites looks amazing
but the idea that im thinking for this site is very different from what im gonna build on based on this layouts

B L U E
July 19th, 2006, 08:08 PM
Very cool. However the business cards look monstrous in the hands, kinda out of proportion. Just a small detail though.

ApixDesigns
July 19th, 2006, 08:40 PM
it kinda looks weird becuase the things that he is holding arent actually in his fingers. they look like its under his thumb and at the top of his index finger... not actually holding it so maybe try lowering the content abit more into the hand.

pablosci
July 19th, 2006, 10:13 PM
yeah
i have to work on those things
the original phorography is only of my hand, and that card size i made it coss if not the logo was not gonna be very visible (this sentence is very bad writed. sorry)

pablosci
July 20th, 2006, 03:04 PM
well
the client did not accepted
this is the second design that i made for them
they say that is not gonna be easy to make something that represent what they do

this one was the first try

http://www.kirupa.com/forum/showthread.php?t=224911

and as i say it, if they reject this, im gonna use this design for my personal site, si that is what im gonna do.