logo crit please... :)

[SessionDesign]

Hi guys, what do you feel about this for a logo? I'm trying to put together a design website for myself and name is "Just Keni"

[DDD]

i like it......maybe space the letters out a tad or try making the text thicker. Other than that I think it is pretty good.

[simplistik]

sokay... not bad... looks just like the other "logo" you did though

[SessionDesign]

Thanks, i'll try that DDD.
Yeah that's right simplistik, but the client didn't go for the one i designed, so i thought i could use that idea instead...

[nerdski]

I like it, but I wouldn't make it thicker. It looks good at the weight its at.

[mikken]

agree with nerdski. But i don't quite get the rythm of it - why are the pieces of the letters cut off like they are? imo, i doesn't, like they say, flow.

They idea is good enough though. Looks kind of familiar, but i can't pinpoint it.

[SessionDesign]

I hear what you say 'bout the flow... The letters are cut of to give it a unique look and can't give you real answer to it. it's just one of those things that happens ;)

Iv'e tried to make the text thicker on this one and spaced them further apart, but i also want to incorporate some kind of "logo" in the logo... :puzzled: What do you think?

[B3NKobe]

I think it needs alot more work done on it, Would like to see a larger version as well, as for the revised one in the above post, I think that the cross thing on the left is too much, take that away, but I like the 'designs' under justkeni, :player:

[Anogar]

I don't really catch the "j" in that logo. It's an improvement though.

[mikken]

Maybe instead of the cross you could have a curve like the ones fromt the letters or something. I think it's a great improvent, like the sub-text and box, but maybe b3nkobe is right.
To be super-picky: I would try to space the letters in "designs" a little so that it ends just before or after the stem of the t. Maybe that makes it too spaced-out though, but i'd try it.

[SessionDesign]

What are your thoughts on this one? :)
Logo design is not one of my strongest parts, but i try to make an effort... :blush:

[ApixDesigns]

i really like that! its cool cuz its kinda like a smilie face.

[SessionDesign]

I'm glad, cause that was kinda the idea... :)

[Bohner]

Yes, its much better now. But you have to make the "designs" part bigger. It won't be readable in a smaller, raster version.

[theflash]

last one is really nice :thumb: love that smiley

[Mr. Kite]

Nice little logo. Its cool. I really like the text style. Good job.

[ollie-]

Like the shape of the last one, but not the fact you can see a smiley in there. Either remove the two dots or the curve, then it will look cool (-:

[SessionDesign]

Thanx for the feedback guys! Guess i'm moving in right direction... :smirk:

Ollie, you thought something more like this?

[Anogar]

I like that one. I like the idea of the first one there, but it looks a little like a mouse to me. :pa: The second one is nice as well. How does it look when you kern the 'designs' out as wide as the 'justkeni'?

[SessionDesign]

hmmm.... well it would look something like this :D Think i like that, thanx! :hugegrin:

[SessionDesign]

I could also do something like this... or switch the name on the top, side or... whatever :eye:

[Anogar]

I think that in practice you'd find you used both of those logo arrangements for different applications. They're both nice. Glad you like the kerning adjustment idea, I think it looks nice too. :thumb2:

[SessionDesign]

Thanx again for your comments! Think i'm going for the last for here... Does anybody has any suggestions on what colors i should use on this?