Please critique my personal web site - 2006

[AXiAL]

Hi guys,

I've nearly finished my personal website in flash.
Would greatly appreciate feedback from the Kirupian community :)

http://www.eftel.com.au/~axial/pws2006/

thanks heaps for the feedback.. I have a long way to go with regards to design.
Im working on a new colour scheme, and will add content to home followed by transitions and sound.

[travis]

Add text or some graphics to the first page, it doesent look good just white. The rest looks good, nice flash work, yeah it's prety nice, add a little more colour and it will be great.

[graffio77]

Nice, clean and simple...
Wonder you should add more colour and more content in the home.
I don't like the phone picture in the contact page.
Bye

[jagreen78]

First off, when I open your page link I'm brought to a blank page that just stares at me until I do something....change this. Put an image in the background or something so that my eyes aren't bored while I'm figuring out what to do on your page.

The green borders aren't very warm feeling either....maybe try out a few other options.

The menu text at the bottom is small and not friendly on the eyes.

When I click on each option and the flash loads inside the main area, I'm guessing you are using a movieclip that loads in flash here, make the transitions different depending on what menu I select. The just fade into place and it's rather boring. The whole purpose of flash is to be creative and allow interaction, otherwise your web site could be done totally in html with static graphics.

[jmpmusic]

getting there...

[anardodesign]

I like cheese, but I don't like your site,:look: I have a feeling there is a problem! jaja

I really don't like the center spcaer, and the hard to see colors, I belive you need to work something out on how things are going to load in, and out. Also like they said on top, I came into a blank page, I was already living, but I desided to click!

Lator dude! :)

[Sillapanon]

First time when I saw that a blank page. It make me confuse, Is my machine error?? but I tried to press some button there was something happens. All right no error, I think homepage must has content even if I didn't press any buttons.

Second when I launched to fit in my screen 1280*1024 it has too much space around content box .Don't you think?

Last thing I think you should find more suits color scheme.